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When a person playing Minecraft gets killed by an Enderman, he gets reincarnated into My Hero Academia
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Write a reviewplease continue author san plsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplspls๐ข๐ข๐ข๐ซ๐ซ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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man your fanfic is good or maybe very good depending on who you read it but it is underrated, maybe because of minecraft i don't know but your work should have more recognition
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its too rushed, it feels like the author wrote it in the least amount of words possible, don't do that, take the time to describe the intricate details even if they're never going to be mentioned again (could have described the state of the room his computer was in, or the room he met God in) needs to describe the characters in detail, not like 'he had a white beard and looked old do descriptions like 'he had a white mane of hair flowing down his chest onto the pristine marble floors' the author needs to take the time to paint a picture with their words.
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Not a bad start, but would love it more if it was a little bit longer. I like the idea tho, seems fresh and the chosen powers are ok, not great not bad just ok.