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The Legendary yonnin of konoha(Dropped)
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This the story of an orphan who at his third birthday misteriously gain knowledge an experience of the ninja life from nowhere ! Chakra control ? perfect . Kekkai genkai ? check . Ninjutsu ? check. This is the story of an orphan named Zao who gets adopted as the brother of tsunade-chan who just lost everything and her family , both having 3 years old get found by a old man in white and red clothes with a red hat ! giving them a house and monthly money to make a living .
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If you are going to make 4 ninjas of: Tsunade, Jiraiya and Orochimaru you should change the name. Sannin means 3 ninjas, there cannot be a fourth, I recommend you put Yonnin
1. Author is a dick 2. he spent more effort and brain power in creating system and status page then his characters and plot in which he got totally luckiest dude in konoha that made no sense what so ever 3.i don't give a SHIT IF THE AUTHOR DID THIS FOR FUN THIS REVIEW IS FOR BEING ADICK AND WESTING MY TIME READING THIS ZERO BRAIN GARBAGE... 4.last but not the least LEARN HOW TO TAKE CRITICISM ASS HOLE to write better .... 4.
the worst sh** in the market XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Pretty much unreadable Hard to understand Rushed A lot of plotholes Plus a lot of other small things
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Yea homestly i read the first few ch and just had to stop because 1. Spelling and grammar were horrendous 2.story was extremely rushed and the flow was so bad that it hurt water thats how bad it was 3. plot holes but i respect the author because he still stuck with his story so props to that but i also must warn him that he should properly learn english and also read some books to understand how to write but good luck author you can only get better