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Rise Of The Abandoned Young Master
Emperor Kong Ming was the strongest who ruled over trillions of Martial Artists. Betrayed by his junior and disciple died, Heaven gave him another chance.
He take oath, in this life he will slaughter all the people who betrayed him .
But In this life in this unknown world when he has to Cultivation all over again can he become strong enough to take his revenge , or will he trampled under someone's foot.
(Disclaimer, this is not a isekai, MC dose not go in the past . but reborn in the current timeline.)
( author note : I have zero experience with lots of grammar problems. but if you still wants to chack out than please read all the chapters and then decide what you will do.
If you drop the book at some point don't forget to mention th reason.
Another thing I don't know how to play with words.
No harem.)
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Although I feel like everyone and their mom has an Emporer called Kong ming. The author has a vivid imagination and and I am expecting more from this novel because writing novels like this need something to set it apart
You gave the mc the greatest background but guess what, you couldn't make him act like a ruler at all, he gets excited about an earth skill even when he was transported into a lower world. I don't know which cultivation method he uses, his prowess or any special skills. He has nothing, he just somehow became strong enough to beat some random fat dude. Then comes the grammar, it is disgusting, I would've understood if there were minor mistakes like some missing letters but, wow, can you not even use capital letters when starting a sentence or writing a name? The plural of any word in the novel is "word's" instead of "words". Huge mistakes that don't allow me to enjoy this novel. The plot is nothing new but it can be amazing... you couldn't make it so. The world backround is just you stating that there are 5 kingdons, that's all. I can't give you more than 1 star for writing quality and world backround; 3 stars for story development and character desing(which don't deserve even this much). I think you should rewrite this novel, correct your gramatical mistakes and remake the mc's personality. Good luck~
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I mean I know in the synopsis it mentioned grammar problems... but if that isn't even done well it doesn't bode well for the acc story. You still want it to look promising.
first of all you seams new writer. it’s ok keep writing you will Learn more. about story development It's like other Chinese cultivation novel but you add some extra about haven that other novel don’t say. you didn’t say much about main character design how he looks now. update is main factor keep it up update Daily. Don't make world like main character go from one realm to another It's boring. make something different. keep learning and keep this novel as long as you write You'll Learn. your idea is so keep it up.
Great work bro.I'm so proud of you(you know why). Although, you have to improve your grammar skills, the concept is quite clear. Interesting so far. Good luck.
a great story can come of this but you will need grammar corrections and an expansion on the story I would recommend that you do not drop this story as it can become a huge hit if reworked
overall it seems like a promising novel to read. the author needs to get a editor or write this in grammarly or something cause the grammar gives me a stroke.
The story concept is good. Some chapters switch to a completely different novel in the middle of a chapter. Most of the chapters writing are a little hard to read but not to bad some editing can fix; however one chapter at least was extremely hard to read I would say machine translation but I've read some machine translated novels that were easier to read then that one chapter (chapter 117), most chapters are not bad and the story is interesting so I have stuck with it for that long but not sure if I will any longer.
amazing story....nice plot....and I love action novels . Especially those martial arts stunt and all. would be looking forward to see more and more drama and martial scenes 💓💓💓💓
Good novel. I fall in love with this novel.............. ................................................. ....... ................................
Nice ONE I can picture out the good concept of the story. ..... Nice ONNice ONE I can picture out the good concept of the story. .....E I can picture out the good concept of the story. ..... Nice ONE I can picture out the good concept of the story. .....Nice ONE I can picture out the good concept of the story. .....
don’t want to say anything just keep it up. learn more. good story thinking.. ......... ......................................................
hello author can you explain rewrite pace, are you going to rewrite the whole thing or locked chapter, and why are you rewriting, I am quite curious plus when do I read this book and thx if you read this.
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I like some of the more abstract concepts this story throws at the reader, like betrayal, and there certainly is a cohesive theme, something that really ties the story together. I will give more feedback later, but I see no reason why this would not have potential after a little editing. Also - I really, really like action scenes like the ones in this story.
Loved the story's background and setting as well as the characters I read. The author has a vivid imagination and has created a world for us to enjoy! Great Job!
As interesting as this novel is, it's very hard to read. The characters are interesting, I love how feisty the mc is and the world seems interesting so far. I would be looking forward to reading more, but the writing is hard to understand. There's a lot of grammar issues and words that are substituted with other words. The premise is good and this has the potential to be an amazing top-notch story, but I suggest the author gets some help with proofreading.