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In the world where pokemon and humans coexist, main character found an opportunity to go back in time to fix his life and decided to live to become the strongest.
This story is inspired by novel Rise of the Dark Pokemon and other realistic pokemon novels. Some of the basic information is still same as those but the plot line is different.
P.s: The first few chapters are like narrative explanation to help readers better understanding with only small interacting between characters.
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Grammar is quite bland. No specified spacings and paragraphs are huge. Character interactions seem a bit forced, but that should improve with proper paragraph writing. Author has a lot of pokemon knowledge, but execution is not up to the mark as only people who already know will understand anything from some chapters. A little editing and this should be one of the best poke fanfics, keep it up author!
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Definitely worth reading gramma needs a bit of work but it gets better as the chaps go on until you don't even realize. ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ
Great story. I really enjoy how the characters backstory is described. Though grammar needs to be improved I think this story has a lot of potential. I also feel is similar to some other Pokรฉmon story I have read but I do feel that even though it seems to take some aspects from other Pokรฉmon stories it has its own feel to it. Keep up the good work author Iโm looking forward to how the story progresses.
i think it the egg is lavitar or gastly what do you guy think . This story is really getting exciting i hope he make his villan organization in future
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it reallyyy gooood but the stability of updates its bad other than that the story is really good till now its been 2 months since the last update still waiting
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this will be a great edition to pokemon fanfic on the site the male lead is actually evil and will really try to rise through team rocket.
I read Rise of the Dark Pokemon was very good, I hope you don't give up ... I support you.............................................................
I love the uniquenes off this story and the development is Awesome. Overall this is one off the best storys i have read.[img=update] [img=update]
Is this dropped? :((((((((((((((((((((( there has been no update at all._.._.._.._.._.._...__...__..._.._.._.._.._.._..._..._.._._.._.._._._.._.._.._.._..
This is a great story which has a few plot holes, but is of good quality that is slowly improving as the story goes on. I came across this story and binge read it all in one sitting as of chapter 31 so it is well worth the read. The MC is smart and plans his next steps well which is nice. He is also calm and ruthless but doesnt act like an over the top edgelord either. Nice balance of confidence that borders on arrogance but well written so doesnt grate on oneโs nerves but more as somebody who is supremely confident in themselves. I am not a major fan of his choice in Pokemon but they make sense for his situation, personality and goals so its more of a preference and nitpick than anything else in that regard. Although i am still crossing my fingers that he will catch a Heracross for his team. Fingers crossed.
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this is a good fanfic with a pragmatic mc. Unique view on pokemon and its ability. Instead of focusing on simply increasing levels of Pokemon which is boring, this story is intrestingly good.
๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ I am very sorry for my grammar and usage of words this is my very first fanfic. Thank you. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐