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"From now on, let the world feel pain." Above Konoha, Uzumaki Naruto started to talk indifferently, throwing out a large spiral wheel that was as dark as ink in his hands, bursting with endless light and heat, and razing everything he saw. One was not influenced by Asura Chakra, one lived in harmony with Kurama since childhood, one received modern compulsory education since childhood, and the other watched the entire "Naruto". A different Naruto story.
(i did not create this, just fixed some grammar https://comrademao.com/novel/let-the-world-feel-pain/)
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this is a mess even if you can get past the wuxia stuff the fanfic itself don't make sense sometimes this fanfic must be MT don t bother reading it
Don’t bother reading. It’s good in the beginning, but in the end Naruto turns into a typical cultivation novel protagonist, arrogant as ****. The whole story completly changes direction and becomes a comedy harem
keep it going. loving the way its headed and the fact that Naruto is not some common simp chump to be pushed around! kill the hokage, danzo, and the other pos lord waste of space. make konaha bleed!
A great read and we'll designed character growth. I like that the author is not keeping with the MC being a simp nor a goody goody that forgives everything done to him.
Can barely read it, is a Google translation, is too confusing where and when he is. Which pov it is and what is going on in the story. I Believe it is probably an amazing story in Chinese but horrible in this translation.
Writing quality is kinda meh, with google translate you can convert some Chinese words into English. Liu = sixth, dao = path. So liu Dao is sixth path, and there's also six dao = six paths too.
This is actually a pretty good fanfiction without much propaganda for social credits. But the only downside is horrible Grammer and horrible choice of wordings for character interactions. Its so horrible that my brain cells can't take it anymore, so I have no choice but to drop it. Pity that this one has so much potential.
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Dices que si pudieras volar Ya jamás regresaría Yo apunté Al azul, al azul del cielo Todavía tienes que recordar la tristeza Para poder ser fuerte ante el dolor Todos los sentimientos que tienes Deben ser expresados con palabras Si en un sueño Llegarás a despertar en un mundo Desconocido Abre tus enormes alas y vuela Dices que si pudieras volar Ya jamás regresarías Y en tu mirada puedo ver Las blancas, las blancas nubes Solo tú puedes hacerlo Encontrarás lo que buscas Sigue tratando de ser libre y verás El azul, el azul del cielo El azul, el azul del cielo El azul, el azul del cielo Siempre usas palabras llenas de crueldad Tratando de deshacer lo que te suele atar Deshazte de la jaula que impide tu libertad Y no vuelvas a mirar hacia atrás Tu corazón Late muy fuerte y tu aliento resuena Ahora abre la ventana Y vuela Dices que si pudieras correr Serías capaz de hacer cualquier cosa ¿Lo puedes escuchar? Esa distante, esa distante voz Toma con fuerza mis manos Y yo seré tu guía Juntos vamos a encontrar El azul, el azul del cielo No importan las veces Que tengas que caer Solo tienes que levantarte Y seguir hacia la libertad Dices que si pudieras volar Ya jamás regresarías Y en tu mirada puedo ver Las blancas, las blancas nubes Solo tú puedes hacerlo Encontrarás lo que buscas Sigue tratando de ser libre y verás El azul, el azul del cielo El azul, el azul del cielo El azul, el azul del cielo
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飛翔(はばた)いたら 戻らないと言って 目指したのは 蒼い 蒼い あの空 "悲しみ"はまだ覚えられず "切なさ"は今つかみはじめた あなたへと抱く この感情も 今"言葉"に変わっていく 未知なる世界の 遊迷(ゆめ)から目覚めて この羽根を広げ 飛び立つ 飛翔(はばた)いたら 戻らないと言って 目指したのは 白い 白い あの雲 突き抜けたら みつかると知って 振り切るほど 蒼い 蒼い あの空 蒼い 蒼い あの空 蒼い 蒼い あの空 愛想尽きたような音で 錆びれた古い窓は壊れた 見飽きたカゴは ほら捨てていく 振り返ることはもうない 高鳴る鼓動に 呼吸を共鳴(あず)けて この窓を蹴って 飛び立つ 駆け出したら 手にできると言って いざなうのは 遠い 遠い あの声 眩しすぎた あなたの手も握って 求めるほど 蒼い 蒼い あの空 墜ちていくと わかっていた それでも 光を追い続けていくよ 飛翔(はばた)いたら 戻れないと言って 探したのは 白い 白い あの雲 突き抜けたら みつかると知って 振り切るほど 蒼い 蒼い あの空 蒼い 蒼い あの空 蒼い 蒼い あの空
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Me encantó, la trama es muy interesante y el giro de naruto también es muy inesperado, además los cambios que ocurren a otros personajes gracias al cambio abismal del personaje principal realmente son impresionantes. :3
is there romance? i hope so its fine if not but i just want to know and not be disappointed in the end…. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .… . . . .
I haven't read but it's bothering me that the vote is still 9 aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Very good! I'm excited as the story proceed! Please keep doing your great job, and thank you for allowing us to read the wonderful fanfiction!
It's just the grammar that needs fixing.........................................................................................................
dude even cuz of the bad reviews, keep editing the novel, I like it I don't really see a problem nor do I care dude even cuz of the bad reviews, keep editing the novel, I like it I don't really see a problem nor do I care dude even cuz of the bad reviews, keep editing the novel, I like it I don't really see a problem nor do I care