Mushoku Tensei the merchant's son

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Twin_Star_12

Shameless Author here. If you want to put bad review, then please give reasons. If good review then do the same. Don't bother putting a review if you just put random letters. Thank You(~￣³￣)~

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Zan_M

if it’s like his other fanfic will be perfect, I don’t know if he will have as much fun as the other because magic is more comprehensive and diverse, so I suggest he learn to forge swords and enchant them by recreating famous anime swords, it would also be cool for him to recreate techniques of anime sword like Demon Slayer.

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DiabloRedfox

There's nothing anyone can do, nothing anyone can say There's little can be done right now to make this go away Clichéd simple platitudes do naught to quell the dread And the breadth from gravity just send me crawling back to bed It's useless in this moment to say well get through this somehow There's time enough for action but that time isn't now Soon we can start planning for what may come to be But what i could use right now is a bacon roll and a cup of tea I don't need positive affirmations, I need to scream a bawl

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Dao_of_Melancholy

Yes yes yup yes yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes yup yeah I yes yup yup yes yes yup yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes

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True_Excalibur

Pretty good story overall. It's a little too early for me to judge but I wanted to give a review to help boost the story. Overall I came to this story because I liked the author's other story.

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Valu_Loufiimai

Yes u may continue writing more. Pliz😙 👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜👁😍😜

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Hakugei

Very good! I don't have any Critique yet, as it's perfect. I think this is going to be one of the best mushoku tensei fanfics I've ever read. I wait for the next chapters!

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Sebastym

Cool..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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ReMormius

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Sebastym

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InnocentThoughts

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alesjandritos

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Sebastym

Good..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Ded_Tyen

This is cool..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

This fanfic is great, I like the protagonist........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Perfect, when it happens that everyone is teleported, whether or not he is with Rudeus and Eris, I would like you to let everyone survive alone. Not Ruijerd until later.

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Leylin_Bash

Nice...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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inofensivo_02br

Mano ate agora que só cap 5 estA bem interessante e eu não achei problema nenhum na história 👍👍 O MC e bem interessante e tem uma interação bacana com a sua família espero que o autor poste mais capítulo o mais rápido possível já que sempre estou aqui esperando