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Can a single person rise above everything the world throws at him?
A world where a single person's life is only worth the amount they're able to carve out of the other's body... a world where the veil of society is held together with a thin veneer, in tiny pockets of a world they once inhabited...
Sam is about to hit the coming of age ceremony, and his life up til this point has been good with two caring parents attending school everyday, yet will he throw all that away because of what's about to come?
A cultivation-esque, monster taming/evolution story.
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Good original story, has a lot of potential. However, it is in desperate need of a prologue to explain some key world building things. Also Author doesnt do a very good job in explaining the setting, and transitioning scenery, though its still readable if a little confusing at times (also author a more personal critique, plz give characters names even if they arent too important for example the "bro" from chap 1-3 ish is never really given a proper name. It's just hard to follow later on is all). Critiques aside I've been enjoying the character development of MC throughout the hailstorm of unfortunate events hes experienced, and look forward to more chapters.