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Okay I got emotional in 1St two chapters .His dad was brave but sometimes its good to be selfish .Good story author .I wish that you update more chapters ! 6 chapters are too less to read ..keep it up .good work .
the story was very amusing to read .the way the author wrote it was quite good. I can see it has a lot of potentials. even the writing style is very brilliant. although I would have to give a less star for the world development and I think I'll know why. anyway good luck for ur journey
I'll give this book a perfect 5 because I see a lot of potential in it. I am interested to see how the author will transform an 'ability less' boy into something through martial arts system. I could almost hear a trailer where it starts with.. "In a world where ability is everything..." Good job, writer-him!
weak pacing, more into world background. i was waiting for his time but alas, it was all about supernaturals. i just reached chapter 3 and didn't read for since i lose my interest. idk, but the excitement is missing or something a hint of the story. i don't rlly like superheroes society since they got to bland with the plot more focused in the action of the society. so i guess it's not my tea. the impression that it gave me was weak, enough to drain my attention span.
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The story is great! I liked the word choice If you are a fan of system related stories, I highly recommend this book. The cover is amazing and attention grabbing, the synopsis could be improved. The first chapters are hooking. Overall this story us amazing... keep it up author! will add this to my library😇
Though the Premise seems Familiar the author does a very good job of adding its own twist and uniqueness and make this one its own story. I look forward to seeing more of the Story unfold in future. But in the early chapter I notice some minor Grammar and spelling mistakes but overall the Story is easily understandable and the Formatting makes it very easy to Read which I appreciate. I will continue to read more of this story for sure from now.
It's soo awesomely interesting and inspired you. Imma be your disciple now. I am out of words but keep going dear Author, I will follow. My heat beats gasoline because of this and thats my honest confession.
Chapters are great? When will next chapter come? ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The pacing is good and the narration is easy to understand. If you are up with the classic isekai, weak to strong system, have this novel a go![img=recommend]
This is a really good book, although it is only a work in progress, the few chapters of the book already proved it was beautifully written. I highly recommend this book.
Amazing web novel! Interesting and nice story! I appreciate it very much. keep it up!👍👍👍👍. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
So far, the novel has been interesting. Just hope the author updates chapters daily since I'm impatient one... The plot description intrigues me. I never came across such a novel. I'm very curious about MC's powers...😤6 chapters in, mc still in weakened state with no powers gained. It's very slow but not boring at all as other aspects kept me going until now. Just need some thrill in this story... don't know when will that happen. but I'll wait until then. To author, please keep updating chapters and feed me your story. That's all I ask.
Although I read only few chapters of this novel, I still think it's interesting enough to keep on reading. I'm also intrigued about how the author will portray the plot which is mentioned in the synopsis. As I already read some novels about cultivator transported to superpower world and vice versa, I still don't think it's cliche plot especially when it's about martial souls and spirit masters. I'm a diehard fan of soul land (Douluo Dalu), which is a chinese novel and 3d donghua. So, I'm expecting great things from this novel. Hope the author won't disappoint me. 👍 That's all. I might edit or rewrite my review according to the future chapters, so give me something to read worthwhile. That way, I can share this novel with my friends and say good things about it. Good Luck! Keep Writing! 🔥
It's a very unique piece of writing, an epic saga. It's a work of fiction but the plot cleverly mirrors the violent and greedy emotions and of the mankind. Readers can empathize with the protagonist. Very easy to understand. I am totally moved by this phenomenal work. Can't wait for more chapters.