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The Secrets Of The Cursed World
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Once upon a time, there was a kingdom known as Astrea. Shivanshi who was the third princess of this lively empire was living happily until one day - a prophecy changed her life when she was 5 yr old. She was abandoned by her Royal family and thrown into the Forest Of The Cursed Creature , where there lived a tale that whoever enetered can never come back again.
In a place like this, by herself, what will she do now? Will she be ever able to come out alive on her own?
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*Excerpt*
Rudra, sprinted to her side and changed into his human form. He, the beast king, who never shed a tear before, was now weeping loudly while hugging the cold body of the girl in his arms.
"Shivi!! Wake up Shivi!...look I am here.....See I can speak....Shivi I am sorry...I am late.....I...I have so many things to tell you...How can you not give me a chance to say..
You..you said you wanted to marry before you die ...I will marry you!..wake up!..you said you wanted to be with us for the rest of your life..then what is this Shivi?
Silly girl, I love you, I said I love you..wake up now!"
"King Rudra, she is now dead. Please give her body to us so that we may perform the rest of our ritual according to the traditions." the Head Witch said.
"YOU STILL WANT TO HARM HER MORE !" he exclaimed while gritting his teeth in anger.
His deep sorrow turned into a fiery rage and his iris changed from golden to deep bloody red.
And with the change in his body he released an earth shattering growl,
"THEN I WILL MAKE SURE EVERY NERVE OF YOUR BODY BEGS FOR DEATH BEFORE YOU DIE ! "
The beast has now awakened !
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Dear Readers, please note I changed the name of this book from " My Cute Pet Is A Beast King" to "THE SECRETS OF THE CURSED WORLD".
Apologies and Thank You.
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I fell in love with the book at first sight. Now I eagerly wait for updates every evening. So author don't you dare drop it. Haha. .keep writing magical stories author. muah๐
The strory is unsurprisingly amazing . I really love how the plot is revolving around India and it's precious culture and your writing quality is just amazing ..... Haven't got the words to describe it . Waiting patiently for the update ! ๐๐
From the look of things, this is gonna be a rollercoaster ride. But I really pity the poor princess. No one deserves to be abandoned no matter what prophecy it was. Author, you never cease to amaze me with your plot
Dear Readers, please note I changed the name of this book from " My Cute Pet Is A Beast King" to "THE SECRETS OF THE CURSED WORLD". There are going to be so many fantasy characters in the book like witches,, magical beasts, magical tribes, maybe vampires, maybe fairies and werewolves too, depends on my mood and your suggestion to whether add them or not because I am writing it continuously so you tell me if you want something to be added or removed. Thank You from your LAZY_BENGAL_TIGER~~๐๐๐
The author has really created a unique story, integrating the cultural background along with the poems sprinkled throughout make for an interesting read. I'm eager to see where the author takes the story.
The story is very creative and fun to read. The world is already vivid with many images that pop into your mind the moment you read them. Would love to see where this is going.
[Insights about the story here] Dated: 06-06-2021 STRONG POINTS: - Highly readable, good actually - Smooth flow - Good pace and cliffs in initial 3 chaps - Foreshadowing technique - Cultural tinge of India - Expect beasts, curses, weak to strong MC (FL is a kid in the beginning) - Probably romance too - Will give Rapunzel and Tangled vibes for future plotline ADDITIONAL POINT: - Due to the cultural tinge a few words/titles are in Indian language but the key is given down in the notes. - The speech of the elders might sound odd but is justified later on (as per in initial chaps) - For me who loves variations in fantasy and doesn't want vamp, werewolves this is good narration. WEAKNESS: - Being a 5 years old the speech of FL is a little mature at few places. - The repeated paragraphs in 4-6 chapters is annoying, avoid doing that - If possible add content rather poems to complete word count, because the lyrical tinge works in movie but seems annoying in prose. - Chapters get shorter around 5-6 with less content, due to poems.
The story is very vivid, and the writing is truly immersive. There are a few grammatical errors in some place, and sometimes the dialogue structure is hard to follow. However, these are all quick fixes, and it is interesting to see where this story will go. Great work!
Very classically written story! The best part is the descriptions, which are very immersive and being an Indian myself, let me tell you, they are authentic. The tale is itself is classic and there is promise of a great adventure with the Princess who is our MC. The world is beautifully woven and the characters are honestly portrayed. The central conflict is immediately established and plot is clear as a summer's day. I am so proud to be reading this story, dear author and I will continue to do so. Hope you continue to write as well. Thank you!
Shiviiiiiiiiii... poor girl! I love the world building so much! And also Shivi! She's charming! Even more, the characters are all rich and interesting. Please update more soon! I hope the next development will be Shivi's development. To become stronger! hehe, but don't stop the cuteness, please!
Amazing back story, and plot! The author really put a lot of effort into it, specially on culture of the kingdom. And the kingdom's fate was so serious, the king had to do that! Pranam towards the author (Did I use the term right? ๐ )
First of thumbs up for you author, the story line is one of the most unique story had ever come across. The attribute of the novel is so inspirational, and am just letting you know am adding this to library.
This story is superb. The writing quality is amazing and makes you really connect with the characters, the different plot twists resonate more thanks to this. I like how the story also has short pieces of information that explain words or sayings that people from other nationalities might not understand.
It was a lovely story. I like the fact it seems like a mystery. It has a chance of being great. I look forward to it's finish. I plan to keep up with this story. Hope the author continue and maybe sell it on amazon kindle in the future to make money.
Love the story so far! the narration was almost . can't wait to know how the curse is gonna be lifted . . . .until then keep up the good work!
Aha...Shivi...the poor princess..but the author has promised to change her into something new and with the pace of the story and the attitude of the princess, the author doesn't seems to lie. Waiting for the story to run more and more and more quickly.
Beautiful it is my first time reading a webnovel with my setting according culture beautiful and i love the fluffy aunt. overall a beautiful story with ups and down and with defining companionship. Good job looking forward to next chapter..