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Children of Deurom

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Author: jkskike

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17-year-old Aidan Kessler is suddenly thrusted into a game of magic and survival. He comes to learn that he has been chosen to represent an ancient fighter in his attempts to be seated on a council that decides the fate of the universe.

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strawaa

Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.

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jkskike

Shameless review I know, but I wanted everyone to know that this isn't just 'oh here's what I have so far.' I have another 5 chapters written and am writing daily. So if you enjoy it, leave a review or a rating and I'll keep publishing. Thanks!

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Joshua_Hauner

It's an excellent story. It's probably a bit premature to rank the update consistency yet, as this review is done with only five chapters out. However, the chapters are exceptionally long by webnovel standards. With over 3000 words per chapter, each one is roughly equivalent to three chapters that I'm used to on this site. That is to say, the initial release was essentially 15 chapters with a promise of more to come. Personally, I really enjoy the dialogue. I find it very realistic for the age group, with an appropriate balance of comedy and seriousness. Although I'm not certain what will happen, there appears to be a lot of foreshadowing and world building, which I very much enjoy. The subtle hints about the MC's powers before they manifested were really well placed. All in all, I hope this story picks up more traction so that the author will publish more.

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