/ Fantasy / Descent To The Throne
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"When the moon is full in the sky,
And when twilight enters a new dawn,
The forgotten gods shall arrive,
With their age-old armies of pawns.
When the dragon has awakened,
And the titans fist is near,
After the memories have been retaken,
Only then will the truth be clear."
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I enjoyed reading the beginning. it started off great. I wished I got a continuation before the timeskip or at least a few more chapters before the timeskip happens. In the later chapters, it jumps around a little and the characters are introduced a little abruptly (I probably think that way because I'm bad with names). Maybe it's because the main story hasn't started yet thatvi feel this way or it has already started from the 2nd chapter itself. I think the amount of content already given (in 7 chapters) is enough for me to stretch over at least 12 chapters (or more if I add extra worldbuilding details). The writing style is fair enough and grammar is not a problem either. Good work!
The Start just blew my mind and am being genuine. Your character descriptions are godly and I do love the character attitude you have given them. It somehow gives me a HxH vibe when I think about Cole and Kai. Now about your chapter length. It's superb and it's perfect. No mistakes till now and the grammar's in check. Overall a pretty much banger and I hope that the author maintains the quality like this and doesn't drop it. KUDOS WRITER.
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Adventures with magic mixed in!! I love stories like these. (≧▽≦) Your way of writing is quite descriptive and gives me a good imagination of what the characters are doing. The development is pretty good too~ not too fast but not too slow either~ I’m looking forward to future chapters!
The introduction was mind-blowing! Issac's personality at first made me cringe though. The use of curses is a bit too intense but it only adds to the charm of the story. Looking forward to how the story unfolds.
This book has wolfs, Handsome princes and a healing princess. Also a Phoenix and a possible Dragon. The author is really talented and you can feel it radiating from this work. I want more of this.
I think this is a really interesting idea, it seems like kingdoms with magic, which in itself gives room for tons of plot developments, and by the way it's evolving, I think it's going to get there. I only had a problem with two things honestly, the world background being first, it could just be me, but I was confused as to where the characters were at certain times, were they in the hallway? a bedroom? were they eating? the setting was a bit confusing to me, but with a few more description sentences it can be made even better I'm sure. The second thing was grammar, sometimes you'd repeat someones name many times instead of using their pronouns or descriptions. Other than those two, honestly good work man, im excited to see whats next. Good luck on your writing journey!
The Book opens up nicely and is very engaging. I think ot makes for great reading. The concept is quite unique abd doesn’t feel repetitive. Keep writing author!
The concept is solid, the start is building up to an interesting storyline. Waiting to see what happens from here on. The writing style is great too.
Good starting of the story, unique prologue, and the concept, let's see the next few chapters developments, Author Hope you keep the momentum and delivery awesome next chapters.
After the rewrite, it changed. But it changed for the better!!. The wordings and placement along with the pace drastically changed from what it was before but it is on the better side. I trust in you writer and keep up the good work.
Phenomenal, amazing, super great and you get where I'm heading with this. The size of the chapters is perfect in my opinion and everything else is just mmmm. If this was a burger it would be in a 5 star restaurant, but i do have 1 and only 1 problem with it. It doesn't really stand out, if i was looking trough novels i probably wouldn't even see it and even if i did it wouldn't really catch my interest because 1: it doesn't have a picture (it catches people's eyes) 2: nothing thats it.