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James a 16 year old teenager was killed and sent to another world filled with monsters, magic, and death. He was bestowed the evolution system by something or someone so he at least stands a chance in this new life since he refused to die, and James is unwilling to die a second time at any cost!
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I like this book it’s actually really good the grammer is not bad at all I see small mistakes but if your a normal reader you would read right pass it I like this book very much so ima add it to my library the only thing bad is the update schedule I wished they updated more!
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For me I feel quite disappointed by this novel, just my personal opinion. First the idea of an speaking A.I/System is quite annoying. Second there was no reason for him to understand humans as a monster (Lizardman) and not understand goblins. Well you could argument that he is a reincarnated human, but that doesn't mean that the women's father that he rescues just teases them and hinting for them to be a pair. Aside from that the grammar is decent. All in all a decent story, but just not my type.
I like the story so far there are no major grammar issues and ive enjoyed the reas so far. So give it a try