Refinement in the writing would do a world of difference to this novel. I do recommend reading this. It's pretty good, to be honest, but the writing style is just a thing that takes the point away from this writer. 3 stars just so that you have a lot of room for improvement. Just don't get demotivated and drop this.
IT HAS A LOT OF POTENTIAL.
The story has a nice plot but the author's writing style should be improved. If not for that flaw I think this would be a great story with good potential.[img=recommend]
Refinement in the writing would do a world of difference to this novel. I do recommend reading this. It's pretty good, to be honest, but the writing style is just a thing that takes the point away from this writer. 3 stars just so that you have a lot of room for improvement. Just don't get demotivated and drop this. IT HAS A LOT OF POTENTIAL.