/ Book&Literature / Dovahkiin Starting in Harry Potter(AU)
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After dying in and accident and meeting an interesting R.O.B our MC Hadrian got 5 wishes that he had no idea would turn the world he chose to go upside down.
[Harry Potter world, which is trademarked by J. K. Rowling. and I do not claim any ownership over them or the world of Harry Potter except my characters]
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ha ha ha I love the pic lol that's all I want to say that's all I want to say that's all I want to say that's all I want to say that's all I want to say that's all I want to say that's all I want to say
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I would be perfectly honest here, I was drawn in by the cover 🤣🤣🤣 I still can't stop laughing every time I imagine an OC running for their lives as they escape from an enrage dark lord. You should make a special chapter for that it would be hilarious even if it's just in a dream. But jokes aside, as of chapter 9 the character development is coming along quite nicely and the foundation you built for your character is good. You could also have the option of making it into a comedy fanfic or just mix it in for the reader's enjoyment. One problem I have though is your style of writing when two other characters are talking to the MC, it gets kind of confusing if you mash it all up in one whole sentence. So far that is the only observation that I could post but overall it was a good read. Keep it up 👍
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Please continue updating, as I think this story has a lot to offer. While spelling and grammar may not be the best, the overall story drags you in and makes you want to continue reading.
Just the format of the dialogue puts me off This is terrible Why can't you fix it already Jsjdn D S S S S S S S S S S S D H s a f g. S w c c D D D Dd F
I just want to say the story is good. if you can get past the writing stile in the first 3~ chapters then it realy gets better. i have been looking for a fic that belends the dovahkiin powers with HP and its nice to find a good one.
Totally honestly the pic just dis it for me..... Thats all I really wanted to say, so I will just ramble for the next few sentences, ramble....
Haven't read the novel but it deserves 5 stars just for the cover. Also if you see this can you put the cover in the comments so I can download it? Thanks. ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
5 stars. This picture is phenomenal. With no effort, the author practically summarized the entirety of Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows with one picture. This perfectly portrays Voldemort, and Harry. Harry is running away from him and his death eaters, while Voldemort is on a murder spree with Harry usually on the top of the list. Even though I have never read this, please, give this a try. It would be a life changing experience, reading a book with an author that has a super-charged brain.
The story is pretty good but I gotta say, the pics so hilarious, like that's literally the reason I'm reading this fic right now. good job good job good job 👍
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5 star for the pic ...................... ..... . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . . .. .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Pura portada es esta novela Na, hablando enserio lo que le falta a esta historia es más complejidad a las personalidades y los acontecimientos que rodean al MC, todo parece tan superficial que la lectura es como agua y uno no logra la inmersión deseada
te superaste con esa portada esta genial va muy bien el fanfic también por cierto.............................................................................
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This fanfiction has potential, but it would be much better story if you were to double-check if there are no mistakes (grammar, misspelled words and there are way too many I and i mistakes) before posting the chapter.
I am just giving 5 star because of the pic. I was prepared for a harry potter generic fanfic but the pic stole the show for me. I now picture little baby harry potter stealing voldemorts nose and running away while voldemort and his goons chase harry potter for the nose and the whole storyline revolves around voldemort getting back his nose. HAHAHAHAHA.