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I was roaming the palace halls, pretending to be a servant. My heart drummed when I first saw her. Jasmine’s cat-like green eyes haunted me from the moment that I had met her. The new maid in our Saudi palace was everything I had ever dreamed of; a body that made every man kneel, her intelligence was beyond imagination and her passion set my whole world on fire.
Although I knew she truly loved me, her love for me was more like a game of push and pull. She did not wish to marry anyone, and certainly not me.
Meeting Saphira back home in Malibu USA, had seemed like a welcome distraction. And although I resisted, we had deeply fallen. It was not something I could easily take back... Saphira was not everything that I had once dreamed of, and I certainly did not plan to love her. But I did regardless, irrevocably so.
My name is Benjamin El-Raji Saud, Prince of Saudi Arabia.
They say love wasn’t supposed to be easy, I know that now.
The story of how our love became untangled, was messy and twisted and full of heart ache and betrayal.
I truly did not know how our story would end, but is was ours.
Which ship are you rooting for?
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Overall of this book is very promising and a page-turner. With some corrections here and there I am sure this book will become great and captivating. I can't wait to read more and see what unfolds✨✨✨👏🏽👏🏽
A beautiful start with great use of words. I loved how the chemistry between the characters starts to grow through the chapters. The plot is well thought out and the image that has been created by the author is astonishing.
Okay .I will .say the synopsis is mindblowing .This is the first time reading this kind of royal love . I am in awe of this story already .. Keep up author ..I really love this book ..
Overall amazing writing you do have some misplaced phrases and metaphors and your grammar needs some work but I'd say this book definitely caught my attention from start to finish.
nice start, digestible chapters, which I appreciated. Characters seems to be well thought through so give this story a strong 5 starts. will be looking forward to read whole story.
being descriptive is what draw the readers to any story. it make us picture each scene like though we were a part of it Here, the author made us a part of this novel. well done Author. tell Benjamin, am crushing 😊😂
Writing quality is splendid. It's proper, to the point, and easy on the eyes. A first person point of view story telling, it's rare that I enjoy these because it leaves a lot of room for interpretation but the author pulls this off. The development. I wouldn't say is slow it's more, savory. you have to enjoy and take your time with this piece to absorb the full extent of this writing. Very well done, good work my friend!
cool, I must say .well, I love the way the characters don't sound robotic but had their own emotions. well, am not a fan of romance but this one surely is out of this world as I haven't seen any book like this one. I don't like the fact that Benjamin is leaving but the plot I cery good.well, forgive typing errors... not much of my fault *shrug* well done author🙂🙂
OhMygod finally i read a royal family novel. not first novel but i really like this novel and really worth my time to read this. I like jasmine and the sweet man, their first interaction is really sweet.
This is definitely a great read! From the synopsis to every chapter, it's all well written. It's not the typical rags and riches or royalty and commoner love story. This is something that should be read! Love it! Will definitely read more of it! Thanks for this story ❤️
This book will give you a wild ride, every characters have their own uniqueness in some way and the author did a good job at that. The more you read this book, the more you can't stop reading. It's worth reading and definitely worth to try!
I love this book so much, it's so good that I can't wait to read the next chapter, Jasmine is my favorite character in this novel. I really can't wait to see the development of the relationship between Jasmine and Benjamin get so far.
I really like how the synopsis introduces the characters so the reader has understanding of the characters personalities beforehand. The chapters are surprisingly short but not congested which is wonderful. I'm really loving Jasmine already, I'm all for woman empowerment. I'm a sucker for medieval stories so I'll be anxiously waiting on more updates from you :)
good plot. great writing, there is room for improvement but It won't disappoint you. chapters are short but awesome. I will wait for new chapters. author, keep up the good work. make chapters longer and I will be perfect.
Insanely entertaining, superbly written work of art. And I'm not just saying this. I don't often read romance novels but take my word for it, the author has a gift. She has this way hor masterfully painting out a scene almost perfectly, to the extent that you sometimes feel like you are in the same room as the character. Oh, and the characters, the characters are actually brought to life. They feel real, like someone you would actually know in real life. They have flaws, and I think that's what I like most about them. I haven't finished reading this yet, but I am hooked. it had my collection and vote. Highly recommend it give it a read, you won' regret it.
Benjamin is a character I can easily relate with and the princess character seems easily relatable to also, the novel has a nice pacing and I feel the author has done a nice job in this book 😊
Can tell you've put a lot of thought into your characters and their development, really like Raina she seems nice if a little spoiled. Benjamin's character was well designed as well if i'm being honest don't really like him seems like a massive player... Really enjoy reading plan to continue.
I don't know how to describe my feelings. At first, I was quite surprised when I read the synopsis of this story.I thought maybe I'd bang or hit someone in the head because this is the type of story that can get you on a roller coaster. Romance stories that I usually rarely read, (especially about love triangles) or something like that. Even so, I couldn't help myself and continued reading it out of curiosity and couldn't stop even though I wanted to pinch someone a few times. ahhhh!!!! I'll be back to continue reading!
I like the plot a lot. Also the dofferent types of characters that lives their owns lives but end up at the same place and time; also the two girls that falls in love. They both lives diffenrent lives and it’s interesting to know how they deal with the behaviour of the guy depending on their point of view of life. anyways its a good story🌸keep it up💖
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