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One day a 24 Years old Man called Peter was playing video games in his room. Suddenly a weird circle appeared under him and he fell through it.
"Huuuuuhhhh? What Do You Mean I have to marry 4 girls to defeat the Demon King?"
Peter was chosen as the holder of the RING OF ELEMENTS. He Must journey Across the World of Nyland on Crazy and Wild Adventures In order to Marry 4 Princesses From Different Races To Acquire All The Elements and Defeat The Demon King.
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Support for author, i will change this later after there are enough chapters to make a good review. But there are some writting issues that affect the reading.
I think the book is an amazingly good one to look out for although the dialogue is kinda misplaced, I know this is something the author can fix, the book cover is so eye catching. World building is a little off but hey I do the same. But the book is one to look out for good luck 😉 author.
It's really a super-duper fast pace for me. The first chapter feels like you are jumping from one place to another and also the conversation seems a bit off. I don't know if it's in first person pov or third person pov. Some grammar and stuff are not in right place. Punctuations and everything. This novel has potential if the author could fix much. Just keep writing! ^_^ P.S. I'll put this on the lib to read it further in my free time.
Hello, I'm planning for some fun, crazy, and over-the-top set pieces for this novel. I promise you that lol. Please leave a review and add it to your library, if you enjoyed reading it helps me a lot :)