/ Fantasy / The Discarded Princess
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Lara was a lonely and unlucky princess in her remote Rosaline Palace. Not once she took warmth from her father, not once she met her mother, she only knew that she was alone, and no one was to love her. Her life only grew sadder and filled with hatred, until one day...
"You will have what you deserve, Lara! For all that evil and malicious deeds you commit you shall be punished," those were the last words from her brother before he ordered her execution.
However, she came back, and this time, she won't allow them to tarnish her.
"My bride," a tall and handsome man waited outside her chambers, "you finally found me."
Lara smirked, "I am not your bride, Duke. I am only a discarded princess."
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The novel is very engaging, the quality of writing is good. The plot is very unique to read especially since the characters were all well written.
The author is a beautiful writer. The characters are interesting. The story is engaging. I love that the FL is strong and independent. She actually has loving and loyal people around her. I look forward to future chapters.
I finished reading chapter 10, and I can say that the story was interesting. It has a great plotline, the writing style was also good, and so was the characterization. It was engaging for the readers. However, there were a few grammatical errors, typos, and the transitions of scenes were not that clean, which was confusing. I wish the author good luck!
The first chapter ends with a bang. The character development in each chapter looks promising indeed, along with the general direction of the plot. I can give one valid criticism that you tend to head hop between multiple characters in a single chapter. It's better to stay on one POV and watch it develop from there. It gives the reader a more sense of intrigue about what goes on in the other character's mind. As if now, you tend to tell all the characters' inner thoughts, leaving readers with less room to manoeuvre around with their imagination. Apply for the "Show, don't tell" tactics. Best of luck with the new chapters.