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"Everyone raise your hands up high where I can see them!!" yelled the terrorist while pointing the gun towards the students.
WTF!!HOW CAN THIS BE HAPPENING, WHY ME??,WHY??, AM I GONNA DIE HERE?SHIT I'M SO SCARED thought Drey while subconsciously wriggling his legs as if had mind of its own.
suddenly Drey found himself sorrounded by a cold but comfort dazzling light. "Beautiful" he murmered to himself. There in the amidst of nothing a golden chair the size of an adult giant could be seen. Sitting on that profound chair was the the soul reaper
Follow Drey as he reincarnates into One piece
Im a beginner so im soorry for spellin mistakes n whatnot.
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๐๐๐๐๐โคโคโคโคโคโค๐๐๐๐๐it was good some how as your friend it reminds me of you๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ im pretty sure you the stuck up that wanted friends or wanted to stop being stuck up either 1๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐awesome book bro keep it up
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Well, congratulation for your first story then. While I know it's exciting and you want to give him a nice intro, but 4 chapter before he died is quite long wind. No one gonna read that. 10,20 chapter before starting? That's insane... Your grammar is quite so so, enough in my opinion because if I can read mtl, I can read yours. Still, there's a bit flaw here and there that will be fix as long as you keep writing. Exp will make you better writer, gambate.. ๐ I wouldn't critic too much, but I do hope you keep writing. Keep going and you will improve...