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A system was granted, it gave hope for Ivor but the next moments destroyed his soul.
The lonely path for Ivor was created and he had nothing else to do than to smith his way through.
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it's a slow paced story that haven't really branched into the reviewing criteria. However the start of the story starts with a good character creation together with a reason for his personality. For the moment it has a large focus on creation, with most on the smithing. No other support character has been introduced. The story seems like it's building a better progression outline of the mc, as he is developing in his skills before the novel will branch more, I dunno. anyway it is a good story so far, and I'll see what it progresses into👌👌 keep it up