One Piece : From Slave To Pirate!

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HangerBaby

i dont recommend reading this as the author has a habbit of dropping fast. i read another of his OP fics that had 25 chaps it was pretty good. then he deleted it all with zero warning and honestly it was annoying. why does he waste peoples time like garbage

LV 6

laboonlaboon

good so far, but please don't make a OC only crew. carina as navigator would be good, if you refuse Nami, for exemple. the MC can also visit other seas like North blue to recrute canon character, as he is yet to enter grand line. anyway thanks for the story and please keep writing[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]

LV 14

AS9

Extremely generic... There's nothing that you haven't already read five hundred times before on this site... The MC doesn't really have a plan or a dream he wants to achieve at the end which is pretty much what makes or breaks a MC for me when we're talking about OP fanfic... He's just interested in Straw hats and their storylines... So far, he's just visiting the places they visited for some reason... While there's nothing wrong with that normally, but I simply couldn't be arsed to read the same events for the 500th times... It just doesn't make for a compelling storyline... Unless he was trying to take advantage of the canon events for his own benefits... But this guy doesn't really have much ambition or a plan... He's like Whiteboard rather than Luffy... There's nothing wrong with being like WB but it doesn't make for an interesting story... Add in the cliches like "I'm gonna save Ace" among other things and you get the most generic, bland, and uninteresting story as a result...

LV 4

oceansage

So far(11 chapters), story is nice and narration is fantastic. Mc, character wise, is hardworking and author makes him feel realistic, especially when he is training in the dojo. Mc's cheat is great and not too OP. Which requires him to put a lot of effort, in return it makes him strong faster. In short, this is honestly a decent ff and definitely worth a read. I genuinely hope author doesn't abandon it.

LV 5

mikedanger

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

LV 1

SpeedItForce

author you did a good job. An interesting plot, there are no scenes that are repeated in other short stories, the gradual development of the plot, which achieves strength on its own and not with the help of the system at a time, well, in general, I liked it and it would be nice if you continued this story

LV 14

KoroSensei14

Really good story has a lot of promise and hope that the author doesn’t drop it since I’m looking forward to future chapters even if the wait between each one is long.

LV 14

Kenny3408

It's a good story and I like the mc but please put a cover for it every time I look at it and there is no cover it annoys me. ........................

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Monarch_Of_Hell

not bad but not good either got some potential right there.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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PicoPico

It will be a miracle if we got a one piece fanfic without a Harem ! well, can the author do it or not ? ...............................

LV 13

Satya_sai_007

Great story—couldn’t put it down! Can’t wait for the next book. Loved it! Loved the characters. Loved the plot. Love this author. Another great book by a great author. I can’t wait to read the next book. So good I’ll probably read it again!