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When I, a master criminal from earth, reincarnated into a divine body, I was ecstatic. Finally, I didn't have to worry about outsmarting the detectives, being chased by police, and remaining hidden everytime.
I was a prince then, a royalty. I could do anything; have any kind of luxury I wanted. I could pursue the things I liked, rather than the things I was forced to like.
However, the heavens didn't seem to give me a rest. Just two years later, I had to descend to a mortal world with my junior sister, and re-cultivate again.
I would have to compete with my other 7 immortal siblings, to reach the ninth heaven. This was a contest of Ancension to the Immortal World, a contest for the Divine Throne.
With my wits, my immoral experiences, and the memories of the previous owner of this body, Zuifan; I would claim that throne, the Heavens itself.
While others may go the straight path of bitter cultivation for years, I would take the easiest and the fastest path. This mortal world, the resources in it, the rare beauties; everything shall become mine!
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Very interesting. I am intrigued in the sibling relationship and the MC's goals. I want to see what kind of plot the author has laid out. Writing Quality: I can see the quality of the writing and that you try very hard to edit. There is still small grammar errors, but overall content was prestine. I do have a pet peave for authors who tell action words, instead of showing the action. (Example: Sigh, *cough cough) Story Development: The pace of the story is perfect for this kind of genre. Character Design: I can see Zuifan's personality vividly. Just wondering if Chunu will have a big role because she seems invisible to me. Perhaps give her more descriptions. World Background: Good world building. So far the book is slowly explaining itself.
I will be sincere here; I really liked the book. From Your writing to how you narrate the story, I loved the mild sarcasm used, Not many can do this, and you did it in the perfect way possible. For me, it is complete five stars; I can't wait to read more of this.
With a great author like this one and a such storyline that clears away the boredom from the old boring novel concepts. I can't wait to see more from you author. Keep going 👌👌👌
Well written and thought out story. Can be confusing at times but it won't last long. It's a decent read in my opinion but it's not for me, it's too boring or what can I say ummmm.......... Story feels kinda bland for my taste. You can give it a try before Deciding yourself.
Grat read, i ate all the chapters in 2 days. We have shamelessnes, fun and interesting plot to spice it up. I did not really like the MC at the start ( i usually read evil mc stories), but it goes for the better realy fast. I had a lot of fun reading it and my advice to all of you, would be to give it a try. Author looks like a good and communicative, and i had a lot of fun reading it.
I just read this story an hour ago and I can tell this is top-tier writing. I found little to no grammar errors. The characters are fresh and unique, the world building is different from the usual cultivation novels (starts in a desert, layers of lore and mingling of food, culture). The story arcs are satisfying, imo the author should get more power stones. He seems to post daily so that's also a plus point. I really liked the part where Hu Shuo gets drunk, this story is a gem!
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A compelling read. It does more than just tells a story, it enlightens and keeps the readers wanting to know more and more. Very well written, well described with an alluring synopsis sure to pull the readers in for more. As said earlier, compelling. The author is doing a great job. An already really good story bound to get better with each chapter.
Interesting story. Writing a comedy without cringe in xianxia is difficult but the author has managed to do it. I really liked the mc's mindset and character. Overall, great story with a lighthearted feel to it.
Very nice so far. Haven't seen any errors in your writing style and your word choices are quite intriguing, to say the least. Synopsis: Tbh, this is the only part of the book that I didn't truly like. I do find it appealing whenever authors include a section of the story within the synopsis which you did quite well. However, you never really mentioned what the story was about which is why I didn't give the full 5 stars. All I got from the synopsis was a little insight into the characters' personalities and that it seemed to be a cultivation novel. Would be good if you added a bit more information on the entire setting of the story. Writing Quality: You could normally consider me part of the grammar police. However, there were no mistakes that I saw within your grammar or writing. It was all perfect unless I overlooked something which I hope I didn't. Great Job! Story Development: Pacing is a little slow at the start but that's fine. Keep doing what you're doing. Character Design: Not much said here. You barely described the characters unless I overlooked something. You only used broad terms like "Beautiful" etc. But that's perfectly fine as it is a matter of preference. Some readers like to imagine how the characters look instead of having them described by the author. Overall, a great job so far. The book has potential and I wish you all the best author!
From the synopsis to the first chapter everything is just perfect.... I can say that I'm hooked and would love to read more My sense of humor is just great so I can notice the jokes which has kept me laughing and happy... Thanks and good job author
The book has a great start and the writing quality is well detailed and nice. I'm looking forward to more chapters as im left hooked with what im reading so far.... hehe😍😍
This book has a lot of potential. The plot is very intriguing and characters are well written and real. I've only read up to 4 chaps which is not enough to give a detailed and decent review, but this book has been amazing till now and i hope it will be in the future too. And it seems that the author is new as well. I hope you will not drop this.
The book is mediocre in my opinion. There aren’t much scene that gets your blood going. Xpxpxpxpxp pxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxp ppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxp pxpxppxx
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Its not good or bad, just dull and boring Particularly the mc who constantly makes excuses for being passive and pathetic The mc pretends he is avoiding trouble but he is just a coward (the irony being that he looks for trouble) The similarity to japanese wimp mcs is unpleasant