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Very good story, I loved the mcโs character, I loved the plot and its development, I also loved the individual characters pov, the background for the plot was good too.. only problems were the grammar and the misplaced use of he/she or him/her. Only reason it isnโt higher rated is because it was dropped, if u have nothing to read, you could still read this. Very good novel.
Loll The SI has very unrealistic expectations, I stopped when he talked about taking Dany for a wife Many have tried to confine it and watch what happened, He is not even handsome so no reason for ladies to agree to sleep with him , he's of no use to the girls he's trying to reach
Cuando volveras a escribir autor, a mi me encanto esta novela y la personalidad del mc 10/10 la verdad lo recomiendo. . . .. . . . . . . .
At the beginning the story is either barely readable or the pronoun are mixed up. But the idea is very good.
Not my cup of tea. The MC is too unlikeable for me. Not my cup of tea. The MC is too unlikeable for me Not my cup of tea. The MC is too unlikeable for me Not my cup of tea. The MC is too unlikeable for me
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Its okay in the sense that its a good waste of time. There are infinitely better fanfics, but this one is alright. Lots of spelling mistakes and a bit of a powertrip. But it entertained me for like 2hours. So dont go into it expecting something good, however it was a little bit entertaining.
I don't really understand why all GoT fanfics always take the conquest route: Free City --> 7 Kingdoms --> Night King. It feels like all writers are stuck in the same mindset: Canon's Flow. :v 1. Many writers do not understand that the free city has a history, depth, wealth & power beyond the 7 Kingdoms. They wrote about a 15-17 year old teenager who conquered the Free City in 2 years, but took the 7 'ununited' Kingdoms seriously. 2. Many writers are fixated on Daenerys' conquest of Essos, they forget that Daenerys won the war---mostly--because of her three dragons. Most GoT fanfic MCs conquer Free City before they hatch dragons, because that feels too forced. 3. Even with her three dragons, Daenerys did not conquer the Free City. 4. Many people don't know that the Free City doesn't represent half of Essos. 5. Many people don't know that the world of GoT has 4 continents. Westross and Essos are just 2 of them. 6. There are many mysterious lands/kingdoms in Essos. The magic civilization shouldn't just belong to Valaryan. Due to the fact that they never conquered all of Essos, or went to any other continent than Westeross. The author can develop the story without getting hung up on Westeross. I mean, snatching the Iron Throne should be easier than Iron Bank.
Grammar is very bad in this fanfic. Author should rewrite whole fanfic, so that it is readable. I just couldnโt read further than chapter 8. Itโs trully a headache to read.
the story is really good and i like the charachter of the MC. If you want a MC whit no morals and does what he wants the this is for you. just read it
I'm doing this due to some guy complaining about about the character being too evil which makes no sense and sounds like needless nitpicking
ะะพะปะฝะฐั ั ัะตะฝั, ะบะฐะบ ะฑั. ะฏ ััั ะฝะฐะฟะธัั ะฒััะบัั ัะตะฟัั ั ััะพะฑั ะพัะตะฝะบั ะฒัััะฐะฒะธัั, ะฝะต ะพะฑัะฐัะฐะนัะต ะฒะฝะธะผะฐะฝะธะต. ะะฐะปะฒะดัะดััะปะฐะพะฐะปะฒะปัะปั ะฒะปัะฐััะดัะพะพะฐะปะฒะฒ ััััะพะฒัะฐะปะบ
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anti 5 spamm bois------------------.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I've been reading this since the beginning and I have to say this is my favorite. Author you'd definitely need to update in bulk this is too good to wait and Read one by one. Maybe next book do targaryen ff, maybe a viserys si. Anyways loving this, especially the evil Mc, God I love evil mc's
Great but update faster Great but update faster Great but update faster Great but JUST PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD OPDATE FFASTER ........................................................................................................
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this is best fanfiction, must read........................................... can't wait for next update ........... ......................
Iโm enjoying the design of the protagonist heโs unique completely different from most game of thrones fanfiction I enjoy the ruthlessness that isnโt seen often
One of the best Game of thrones fanfictions I've ever read.~~~~``~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~XP~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
MC Kills Rhaegar In Duel With Robert As A Result Of Future People Wasteros Will Remember This Event And It Will Be Difficult To Marry Rhayes / Daenerys Targayen Regardless You Make The Plot MC Getting Daenerys It Will Be More Ridiculous & Forced. It's Better To Make A Plot Where Robert Smoothly Kills Rhaegar So That MC's Ambition Is Accomplished Without Any Ridiculous Plot & Downfall Of This Novel And I Hope The MC Doesn't Make MC Like Chinese Nkvel
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amazing recommend all to read +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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Very poor quality, cheap story telling, cringe mc, coward at heart mc, wierd setting, Very poor quality, cheap story telling, cringe mc, coward at heart mc, wierd setting, Very poor quality, cheap story telling, cringe mc, coward at heart mc, wierd setting, Very poor quality, cheap story telling, cringe mc, coward at heart mc, wierd setting,
Very good story, I loved the mcโs character, I loved the plot and its development, I also loved the individual characters pov, the background for the plot was good too.. only problems were the grammar and the misplaced use of he/she or him/her. Only reason it isnโt higher rated is because it was dropped, if u have nothing to read, you could still read this. Very good novel.
Loll The SI has very unrealistic expectations, I stopped when he talked about taking Dany for a wife Many have tried to confine it and watch what happened, He is not even handsome so no reason for ladies to agree to sleep with him , he's of no use to the girls he's trying to reach
Cuando volveras a escribir autor, a mi me encanto esta novela y la personalidad del mc 10/10 la verdad lo recomiendo. . . .. . . . . . . .
At the beginning the story is either barely readable or the pronoun are mixed up. But the idea is very good.
Not my cup of tea. The MC is too unlikeable for me. Not my cup of tea. The MC is too unlikeable for me Not my cup of tea. The MC is too unlikeable for me Not my cup of tea. The MC is too unlikeable for me
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Its okay in the sense that its a good waste of time. There are infinitely better fanfics, but this one is alright. Lots of spelling mistakes and a bit of a powertrip. But it entertained me for like 2hours. So dont go into it expecting something good, however it was a little bit entertaining.
I don't really understand why all GoT fanfics always take the conquest route: Free City --> 7 Kingdoms --> Night King. It feels like all writers are stuck in the same mindset: Canon's Flow. :v 1. Many writers do not understand that the free city has a history, depth, wealth & power beyond the 7 Kingdoms. They wrote about a 15-17 year old teenager who conquered the Free City in 2 years, but took the 7 'ununited' Kingdoms seriously. 2. Many writers are fixated on Daenerys' conquest of Essos, they forget that Daenerys won the war---mostly--because of her three dragons. Most GoT fanfic MCs conquer Free City before they hatch dragons, because that feels too forced. 3. Even with her three dragons, Daenerys did not conquer the Free City. 4. Many people don't know that the Free City doesn't represent half of Essos. 5. Many people don't know that the world of GoT has 4 continents. Westross and Essos are just 2 of them. 6. There are many mysterious lands/kingdoms in Essos. The magic civilization shouldn't just belong to Valaryan. Due to the fact that they never conquered all of Essos, or went to any other continent than Westeross. The author can develop the story without getting hung up on Westeross. I mean, snatching the Iron Throne should be easier than Iron Bank.
Grammar is very bad in this fanfic. Author should rewrite whole fanfic, so that it is readable. I just couldnโt read further than chapter 8. Itโs trully a headache to read.
the story is really good and i like the charachter of the MC. If you want a MC whit no morals and does what he wants the this is for you. just read it
I'm doing this due to some guy complaining about about the character being too evil which makes no sense and sounds like needless nitpicking
ะะพะปะฝะฐั ั ัะตะฝั, ะบะฐะบ ะฑั. ะฏ ััั ะฝะฐะฟะธัั ะฒััะบัั ัะตะฟัั ั ััะพะฑั ะพัะตะฝะบั ะฒัััะฐะฒะธัั, ะฝะต ะพะฑัะฐัะฐะนัะต ะฒะฝะธะผะฐะฝะธะต. ะะฐะปะฒะดัะดััะปะฐะพะฐะปะฒะปัะปั ะฒะปัะฐััะดัะพะพะฐะปะฒะฒ ััััะพะฒัะฐะปะบ
Reveal Spoiler anti 5 spamm bois------------------.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I've been reading this since the beginning and I have to say this is my favorite. Author you'd definitely need to update in bulk this is too good to wait and Read one by one. Maybe next book do targaryen ff, maybe a viserys si. Anyways loving this, especially the evil Mc, God I love evil mc's
Great but update faster Great but update faster Great but update faster Great but JUST PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD OPDATE FFASTER ........................................................................................................
I love it.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
this is best fanfiction, must read........................................... can't wait for next update ........... ......................
Iโm enjoying the design of the protagonist heโs unique completely different from most game of thrones fanfiction I enjoy the ruthlessness that isnโt seen often
One of the best Game of thrones fanfictions I've ever read.~~~~``~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~XP~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
MC Kills Rhaegar In Duel With Robert As A Result Of Future People Wasteros Will Remember This Event And It Will Be Difficult To Marry Rhayes / Daenerys Targayen Regardless You Make The Plot MC Getting Daenerys It Will Be More Ridiculous & Forced. It's Better To Make A Plot Where Robert Smoothly Kills Rhaegar So That MC's Ambition Is Accomplished Without Any Ridiculous Plot & Downfall Of This Novel And I Hope The MC Doesn't Make MC Like Chinese Nkvel
Me encantaMe encantaMe encantaMe encantaMe encantaMe encantaMe encantaMe encantaMe encantaMe encantaMe encantaMe encantaMe encantaMe encantaMe encantaMe encanta
amazing recommend all to read +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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tame lyanna stark pleaseeee!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Very poor quality, cheap story telling, cringe mc, coward at heart mc, wierd setting, Very poor quality, cheap story telling, cringe mc, coward at heart mc, wierd setting, Very poor quality, cheap story telling, cringe mc, coward at heart mc, wierd setting, Very poor quality, cheap story telling, cringe mc, coward at heart mc, wierd setting,