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The boss of the Mafia group Jung Hoon. Who is well-known in the world of assains. He's the most wanted criminal but can't be arrested due to no evidence by the police. He's elegant and can make anyone fall in love with him. Despite being criticized by the media. He has a kind and humble behavior for his close once. which provoked him as a God, for the impoverished people and god of New York. Being occupied in his life of violation. He encounter a girl which made his heart flutter. Expect to not encounter her anymore but who can resist the destiny.
Annalise is a self-independent girl. Who works in the Event management company. She's a girl who has a lot of sadness inside her frigid, elegant and gorgeous face. She lives in New York with her brother. She loves her more than her life. Making him successful in his life.
One day Her brother accidentally got hit by Jung Hoon's car. She ran towards the hospital and a voice came of slapping someone.
Read this story to know about Jung Hoon's situation after getting first time slapped by a girl.
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The first chapter was a bit short to me and there's not much that I can go off of but I do have suggestions. When it comes to dialog, its best to have the person speaking have its own paragraph, for example: Auo raised his hand to his temple, rubbing his head to lessen the oncoming headache. "I don't want him on my team," he said with anger laced in his tone. "Too bad," Beck began," he's the only player left so you must have him on your team." Also, some sentences were incomplete and lacked tone and mood. Despite this the plot is interesting and the setting isn't too hard to understand. The characters so far are realistic and the world background has potential to become more.
Already up to a good start. Still there are a lot of reservations but these types of stories takes time until everything comes to fulll circle and the cutesy romance stuff would arrive.
Quite a short chapter, but a lot happens! The FL seems sweet to me, so it's kind of weird that people at the office are afraid of her? Or maybe she will show more of her personality later? My interest is piqued to know more about the mafia dude, and see how the two leads lives will collide. There are some typos, or switching of names and such that gets a bit confusing but other than that I was quite immersed in reading about Annalise and felt happy for her when something good happened for her in the beginning of this story. I'm interested to see what other conflicts will occur in the story! Added to my library, and will keep an eye out for updates. Keep going and don't forget to take breaks to drink water hahaha I need to do that too.
This all flows very nicely, it has the hallmarks of an experienced author. I really felt immersed in the elegant and glamorous world the author wanted to create. It's full of passion and emotion with a very interesting setting.
An interesting read. Very well thought out and written. There is no mistaken, this is a fascinating novel that must be read. Great job author.