Konoha Hypocrite (TL)

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Reimoss

This story is good, would've been even better if it wasn't written by some chinese guy. It's like there is another world in China, their way of thinking and the way they think the world works is like they have some mental issues. Every time I read some chinese novel I feel like losing IQ. It's a shame that anyone else other than chinese can't write novels with so many chapters. They always drop good novels after a couple of chapters

LV 4

Regularman

This is the best naruto novel that used genjutsu as its supposed to be used, nydawo never dissapoonts. The MC is willing to do anything to improve his power which is sonething i like

LV 5

wordless_sky

I like the story, there are some mistakes but nothing very serious. the character reminds me a lot of a certain captain of the 5th division, Aizen Sousuke I hope he doesn't self-destruct like Aizen.

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nyawdao2

Passing through the Naruto world, Uchiha Tunan obtained the inheritance system. As long as you obtain the recognition of others, you will be able to obtain all the abilities of others after they die. Hence... "Since Konoha's higher-ups treat our Uchiha clan so differently, I've decided to lead the Uchiha clan in three years." "Ding! Obtain the recognition of the Uchiha clan." Two years later. "Tunan, this is the evidence of the Uchiha clan's betrayal. After all, it is your clan. I want to hear your opinion." "I will always stand on the side of the village." On the night of extermination, Uchiha Tunan stood on the Hokage Rock and looked coldly at the extermination of Uchiha's clan. He opened his hands and thanked the gifts of his clansmen. The next day. “Hokage-Sama, I have shed blood for Konoha, and I have suffered a lot for Konoha.” “This is how you treat the meritorious clan, didn't you agree, Tunan?" "I don't know what you are talking about. The hatred of clan extermination is irreconcilable. Today, I will destroy Hiruzen and Sarutobi clan to comfort the spirits of the clan in heaven." High-end hunters often used camouflage to lower the defense of their prey.

LV 14

DetachedDreamer

Not a bad story, original idea, and the speed of development is good. Most characters are very one dimensional, usually only having 1 things that defines their drive and meaning. the 3rd has be reduced to a tool box in need of quality replacements for his collection, shaving off any defining traits he had and making him just a cold hearted manipulator but thats like most FFs. The MC thinks of everyone as potential food. He wears a mask at all times, lies to everyone, and is in a prime position to never make a true friend or gf. Don't really see character growth happening at all. He has no real redeeming qualities either Despite that the story hasn't been a terrible read thus far.

LV 1

timeawayfromstress

non racist, not picking up girls like Pokemon, logical, no face slapping, no clichés, thinking with mc brain, the subject is logical. chinese people need to write more novels like this. but even for this novel they said the subject is too bloody, they told the author 3 times the novel They had it edited. Almost all Chinese sites removed the novel until the author edited it. More works like Reverend Insanity and this novel should come. If you know real evil MC novels like this, could you write them in the comments?

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Tsugihagu

very good, the only problem is when they say something that is foreign to my language It's all very well done but instead of releasing one chapter a day it could be two

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ZA_WARUDO_

The main character is smart. He does everything for his own benefit and is probably inspired from Aizen. I love the way he handles his situation. Please keep Translating.

LV 4

Knobbly_Fishboi

It's all-around a great read. An amazing fanfic and I especially love the dark aspects. There are some translation errors, but overall worth reading.

LV 3

kai_56765

one of my favorites, hypocrite MC is just too good

LV 4

Emiko_Okazaki

great Naruto Fanfic, dark manipulative mc. everything is perfect. almost no grammar mistakes, even though it's translated.

LV 1

Ishika_Banerjee_7356

Loving this book from the bottom of my heart. Mc is perfect, just perfect. It's really rare to find such a amazing and realistic yet unreal character. Tunan is really a politician with his sweet mouth and ruthless heart. I can't describe it in words how much I love this story.

LV 12

typicalanimewatchr

A good fanfic, it seems the people are talking it too seriously which they shouldn't because its hilarious and has an evil MC like Fang Yuan from RI.

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Magus_Mxviil

The concept is really interesting but the translation is bad. Senjutsu is most often translated to "immortal arts", Sharingan is Kaleidoscope, even the names of nations and people are sometimes mistranslated.

LV 14

LongSongGolden

When the novel is focusing on Naruto content it's all honestly pretty good and moderately well written. The characters all seem to be written with the proper personality and story. The only problem is the author at one point just completely abandons the ninja theme for a section and it starts reading like a generic cultivation novel. it goes back after a while but it's a real slog to get through those chapters. it's so cliche it hurts. the only other issue is that the translation quality varies greatly. sometimes it feels like it was masterfully done, very easy to understand with consistent naming. Other times it's barely a step above a machine translation.

LV 5

Kanira

This fan-fiction is well written. I personally liked it. The more story progresses, more I come to understanding of MC thought process. And it certainly is very terrifying. He is very manipulative. Capable to manipulate anyone's emotions. Thanks for translation efforts and keep it up.

LV 4

Travis_Cat

For those who wanna continue reading go to novelmao.com for the raw -Thought to inform but the chapter 429 was half baked as of 4months ago in case you tried reading it during that time chapters are also slower then before but as of now it's changed

LV 1

Sasori_Marionete

I don't understand how there are people who can like this novel, the characters are forcedly bad (such as Hiruzen), besides the girls falling in love with the MC at first sight, like they literally saw him for the first time and are already willing to kill and die for the hum, If you hear someone saying that this is the best Naruto fanfic you should stay away immediately, because for someone to think this trash is good, it can't be right in their mind.

LV 4

Hsaet_Uchiha

Writing quality -3. Story development -3. Character design - 2. Updating stability -3. World background - 3. First of all it’s a chinese ff. So you know..... Second Mc is too much. about his parents and clan. he did not care. Thirdly I personally don’t like how mc lick 3rd hokage even though he just acting or manipulating. As for what to expect? Everything you can find in chinese ff. except cultivation. But in total it is a 3/5 rating fanfic.

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Dragon_5081

The MC is actually just pure evil you can find no humanity in him. If you enjoy that kind of thing it's a perfect fic ig, but if you don't well it'll probably be an extremely miserable read. Also it's extremely hard to route for him lol.