The Chronicles of Charlotte Croquant

LV 12

Slesk

You just skipped the whole start arc in strokes so broad you may as well have just inserted him into Raisin at the time Luffy set sail. There was also no mention of how the New World power structure is with someone at Katakuri's level aiding Big Mom, I mean that would surely put their Crew in a stronger position against Kaido and Shanks. Also no mention of how the Marines or World Government stand on him, specially now that he as a representative of the Big Mom Crew just busted into Enies Lobby like he owned the place and proceeded to unleash Conquerors Haki all over the whole Marine presence in the place. All in all while I like the concept I feel that the story is too brief to be worth considering past it's premise. I may change my mind and review at a later point if it's fixed. I still encourage the author to keep writing and "git gud" as kids say nowadays [img=recommend].

LV 3

WaffelLovesSouls

i like it very mutch and its just cute for fluff too aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa