One Piece: Kamui

LV 10

Kevinsan3141

Please continue the story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 1

Konoyaro789

kamui [img=update][img=update] kamui [img=update][img=update] kamui [img=update][img=update] kamui [img=update][img=update] kamui [img=update][img=update]

LV 2

MarSus

More more more more more more more more[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 13

_Wessix4Ever

just so you know this is my opinion on the story take it with a grain of salt and read a little before coming to your own conclusions. so far there are about 10ish chaps and I think I can already see where the fic is going the mc might have a system I'm somewhat unsure because it only showed up at the beginning but just keep that in mind if you don't like system fics so far it seems like Harem to me it just feels like the author is already trying to start one with Robin and Tashigi (sorry if that's spelt wrong) who he plans to brainwash? apparently he can do that because he read manga next is the writing that so far feels clunky and awkward I'm going to assume the authors first language is not English but even still the writing is definitely sub par the characters feels so boring so far and the MC doesn't really have a defined personality at times acting like a Young lord and other times trying to woo ladies by being nice or even woo by being Stoic additional it feels like the chaps are pretty unimportant because it felt like we're just waiting for luffy to show up due to the Mc not doing much except insult people so far overall so far I give it 2 stars it's not good but I've seen worse

LV 14

DaoistyQNGiX

The MC wants to get tashigi as his first crewmate and it makes no sense lol just terrrible writing. The author is trying to have it make sense with a trash idea so it just sucks lol. This mc is garbage, cringe, pathetic, boring, and annoying lol his acting is horrendous and whenever him and nico robin are together it is just cringe and awful writing. Great devil fruit idea but this story is horrendous and not worth reading.

LV 5

rogue_shadow

nice nice nice nice nice nice [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] pls don't drop ~~~~~~~~~~~[img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

LV 1

Rain_Sinner

A shameless author reviewing his own work here, I'm still new here, and if any of you guys have any suggestion or critics, please feel free to give comment ^_^. The Mc at the start would be strong against the weak and weak against the strong. He would use provocations, dirty tactic and everything else to fill his loopholes in battle method, and as for harem.... Most One Piece FF has harem on it, but Idk yet >_<

nice one, a pretty good idea with kamui in one piece world [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]