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Derman is the eldest prince of the kingdom of Amadal, and since the moment he was born he was considered to be the future king, that was until his little brother showed great potential in cultivating super human strength, Derman tried everything in the hopes of exceeding human limits like his brother, but nothing worked.
Follow the story of Derman as realizes that he was not as powerless as everyone thought he was.
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Hii author here, I just want to say that this is my first writing experience, that I will try my best and not give up, so please if you have any criticism or feedback it will help me a lot! Thank you for reading ☺
Updated review After reading more updated chapters, I find myself liking the story more and more, it feels as if there was a lot of thought put into creating it, though the worldbuilding is still a little bit lacking in some areas but it should be expected with only the amount of chapters released this far. Good luck author!
great great quality and for free as well it's unexpected because most authors don't do that the story caught my attention in a way that most don't it was unique and new I can see myself reading more of it
Okay, I stumbled on this new novel and though I normally don't read novels under at least 20 chapters I gave this one a chance, and actually liked the chapters already out, I hope you flush out the characters more and don't drop it
Great start! Hope you don't drop it and keep writing more, though there is not much of the story yet to say how it would turn out at the end. Good luck!
I'm looking forward to more chapters, there's not much for a review yet cause it's just 2 chapters but it's a good work! Continue doing your best, Author. You'll get there.
Love the chapter, loved the characters ,good synopsis too good gramma ,would love to see more chapters to this book ,keep it up I loved the first chapter and looking forward to liking more chapters that are to come.😉💯
Good start, to be honest! Hopes to wait untill the cliffhanger in the next chapters. Surprisingly, it has the amount of details for readers to understand the given plot freely. Good, fluent grammar gives it a feeling of comfortability.
Wow, I was amazed. To think one would kill their own father to be king and then try and put their crime on someone else who happens to be their own brother. That is atrocious! The story has great potential. I've added it to my library and will be waiting for updates. Great job!
I like it a lot, I hope he will have time to continue writing! ........................... ........................................................................
the synopsis was very catchy , good job author .................................................................................................................