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A human with not just luck, but a very smart mind... this human is named Samuel and as he seems to be just an average human... well he isn't, and throughout Samuel's journey he makes allies, even finds love... (kind of), but he also makes enemies. However, the choices that he makes will make or break his future, as he does things he regrets... those regrets, always find a way back. But what happens to him is a mystery (well, until you've read the story of course) so let's see what exactly happens in this story.
So, have you chosen to read this story? Hehehe, if so well let's hope you have the amount of brain power needed to understand what's going on... this is also my first "story" so don't expect it to be good... however I will keep on working on it until I see no more things that need to be fixed. Also, this story mixes with stuff of my own with things that other people made (yeah no shit Sherlock, that's why it's a fan-fic).
First, this is an 18+ story, so if you're a young lad, then I would suggest staying away... unless you don't fucking care... well okay then.
Secondly, this story goes through multiple different things including my own. Of those things I would not suggest reading unless you are a fan of the following:
Halo
Pokemon
(these two show up the most which is why they're kind of the mains... if that makes sense)
and short appearances of, Kirby and Portal (and I mean short)
and etc.
(That does not mean that you shouldn't read the story, it's just that you might not understand some of the references)
Thirdly don't expect the traveling between those things to be consistent, some will have more screen time than others.
Fourthly there might be some surprising things that happen, so don't turn away now, because you haven't read the story, and if you like it then put a review, if not then comment on what needs fixing and what seems fine to keep, cause then I don't know what to do if it needs to be fixed.
And lastly, I am writing each of these chapters on a google doc first, so that me and my friends can work on it then I can upload it. However, their judgment might be different so like I said, tell me if something needs to be fixed.
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So this story is currently from what I heard from my friends, a good idea... but could've been executed a little better, which I understand from what I have been reading myself. So if your expecting a good all-rounder, this story won't be like that... For now, I am making updates and I am hoping that I can make it better in the future. Of course I probably won't start making changes yet because I want to get the story finished and have a good base so that I can start editing it from somewhere. So just give it while alright?
A história estava indo bem com todo o processo tecnológico e tal, mas uma vez que chegou no mundo de Pokémon era como se ele soubesse o básico imediatamente. De um momento para outro era um noob no novo mundo para um conhecedor geral, O personagem principal tem mais diálogo com IA do que humanos a conversa vai desaparecer rapidamente, Entendo que a história gira em tordo no jogo de pokemon, mas quem no mundo captura um só jogando uma pokebola sem alguma ação? Estou decepcionado, a partir do capítulo 4 perdi toda a empolgação da leitura.
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