/ Fantasy / Imagine Breaching the 4th Wall
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What could you do if you knew the world you live in was a fiction, but also your reality at the same time? Well, here comes the answer, 'Nothing', you could simply do nothing about it. Isaac was just a little child, being a little more mature than the others his age when he learned this somewhat confusing truth, forcing himself to lose his childish thinking just to be able to shoulder everything life was throwing at him. He eventually did, adapted to the changes and tried to live again, but at what cost? He was aware, more than what was comfortable, and this awareness brought the feeling of curiosity with it, filling his mind even without his will. Life lost the light it once held, replacing it with something more real than the childish light of eternal happiness. Everything, became 'normal', losing their shining lights which were their 'bests' that people could feel through them. The only silver linings was him at least being aware of things most of the people simply ignored without even knowing it or didn't even know, and the fact hat he had a thing that he could call a 'life', a life that held people who he cherished. Although everything became normal in his eyes, it would eventually change, like it happened to everything. With an accident that would create the beginning, which would then lead to the start. Trying to win against his existential crises while also trying to understand himself, this start would simply change the normal he knew of.
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Author's note here: I'm planning for the story be a long one, with chapters not being that much fast-paced. Long story short, you will need patience to see some satisfying contents, although not that far in the future. Oh, and do not expect a typical idiot main character who has 'plot armor' for everything.
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First of all, it is an interesting concept. Normal slice of slight with an mc in something like a "lucid dream". The pace is relaxing and the characters are what you see in your everyday life. However, I don't get how the fourth wall is relevant to the story yet. Another bad point is your sentence structure. You are using too much "as" to describe actions and too many words are crammed into a paragraph. According to my ex-English lecturer. What you are doing is called "Word Diarrhoea" to her. Otherwise, It is a solid 4.8
The story itself is very interesting and the way in which the author describes each event is vivid and showcases the author's unique writing. Keep up the good work!
The story is well-written and not fast paced. It has elements of slice and life in it that you will definetely love. As always, a problem with slice and life is the lack of conflict. However, the author already foreshadowed that there would be inner conflict within the characters that will arise. I am looking forward to that. The idea is interesting, yet the lack of chapters set it back from being a proper execution. The MC can interact with the fourth wall, but what does interacting with the fourth wall actually do? why should he continue to do so? is the fourth wall even important to the story?
Hello there, Author here. The story is about the life of Isaac, who has a seemingly normal life when looked from the outside. But inside of that ever-active mind, there were countless thing playing on. From possible scenarios to what would happen years later based on what he would do in the future. With some 'empty' or 'free' moments in between. Everything becoming normal, replacing their light with something a little less eye-catching. The act of acceptance and the act of wanting change fighting all day long, just to start again the next day. And one day, a typical 'One day', with a normal accident, everything would get messier. With Isaac delving into his mind, which was the foundation of everything. The need to understand and give meaning to oneself becoming even more present in his mind. Though, this change wouldn't just lead him to a road full of thinking about himself, but also make him aware of the hidden wonders of the world he was living in. Slowly but steadily changing the normal he knew of.
it's a really good feel good story. the slice of life aspect brings the story down to earth and makes it unique, the MC has funny lines of his own and the way he breaches the 4th wall and gives his thoughts on what's happening to the reader is just great. this is a book I could see myself coming back to read over and over whenever I'm bored or sad