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Lord of The Accursed

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Author: Mtotheizow

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Phil has had it rough ever since he was born into this cruel, unforgiving world. After being raised in a shithole by shitholes, he died doing the one thing he loves doing. The one thing that kept him sane through all the years of neglect and suffering that he endured. He died fighting.

Reborn as Sito, the Prince of the Epirian Kingdom, he will start anew and encounter many places and people that defy imagination in the deep rich world of Nern.

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I am a connoisseur in all things fantasy, be it novels, shows, anime, movies, games, etc. So I will inevitably be influenced by them and u may or may not notice some similarities. Also I have a general idea of the world and plot direction, but If u guys want me to add some elements or have any plot ideas or characters, u want me to incorporate feel free to let me know as i am always open to new ideas.

I hope you enjoy it and thank you greatly for reading this humble man's novel.

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Katie_Desta

so far I love it! the way u sneakily put info in the dialogue makes it easy to read too. I can’t wait to see the next chapters >:) bbooooooooooooooooooop

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Hmmm, how the tables have turned, hehe.Its pretty daunting to see those walls of texts. I would suggest breaking them up into paragraphs but in the last chapter your started doing just that.Overall, I felt the story was rushed. It feels like the author had things in his mind that he wanted check off, and hurried to do it.This makes the story feelnlike a slice of life, but I don't see the tag. Another reason I said this is because the character is perfect. Powerful and loving parents, no subordinates that are out to kill him, no sibling that wants him dead for the throne. Of corse there is nothing with slice of life, but if that wasn't what you were going for yet it felt like that, then thats bad.Let's see, spelling is good, and, oh, the character. Hmm, honestly he's not good but not bad, just normal.Oh, the fights were choreographed good, i always admire writers that can choreograph a good fight.What else, i supposed its the world building. Haven't seen much of it, but i did like that bit that was added during that convo, but I felt the delivery was kinda forceful and was only there to tell the readers the info rather than a natural convo between two characters.Also, there was a lot of telling rather than showing. Thats the biggest thing in my opinion, but i used to struggle to balance both so its understandable. Welp, thats my review, overall its not groundbreaking, but not bad either[img=recommend]

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