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Jacob Steve, an Old Man, died at 116 after living a whole life.
But Jacob always had a dark side, which he always suppressed and hid from others.
However, in the later years of his life, when death was inevitable, he understood there wasn't any point in having wealth, knowledge, or desires if you couldn't have a life to enjoy them.
He became obsessed with fabled immortality and devoted his reaming life to extending his fleeting lifespan, but just like any other, he failed.
However, he mysteriously got another chance at life and found a way that led to fabled immortality.
But he was also forewarned that the way led to it was filled with blood and darkness!
In the end, Jacob chose it anyway with no way of going back, and it was also the start of his suffering and his icky, brutal journey toward the 'Immortality' he wanted so badly!
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A real hidden gem among the pile of trash in web novels..amazing story with a realistic ruthless mc..Quality of writing is superb..and I can't wait for more chapters to be released..Highly recommended novel read it and you won't regret
Review after chapter 217. Overall the novel and it's progression is good. However, there are a few quirks. Firstly, his background on earth is not defined or limited. For example, what year did he leave earth? How much knowledge does he really have about weapon making? Is he genius enough to create new futuristic technology without any assistance? Next the gun strength seems a bit off. However, that can be fixed by explaining why each gun can kill specific ranks of beasts or humans. Additionally, the limits and reason for things can be defined a bit better. For example, why certain technology exists in a country, but the rest of technology is pretty archaic. Or why someone had a specific type of technology but people above him do not have similar advanced tech. Most importantly, the story needs an editor. The English is good enough to get across the story, however, the errors definitely break immersion. This story could jump to a 4.5 and top rated novel if the previous and future chapters are edited. Keep up the work!
There are only 23 chapters out right now, but so far its great. The grammar is much better than the start of the authors other book.......,,
I think the story is good and I like the quick progression. The language and the style of writing is very good. But for me there are a couple of things that are breaking the flow. 1. the strength numbers goes up a bit to much and we are approaching comedy. First we are talking kg and then tonnes which is good, but now KT (1000TONNES) and it doesn't feel like we have come that far in the story. 2. Spelling can be a problem but it is fine most of the story but then we find a spelling error and it will be used several times in the same chapter and some are reoccurring through out the story. As I said mostly fine but when you find it you will likely find it again during the same chapter. 3. I don't know if it was an error or if it was a change the author wanted to make but there are switches between mph and km/h. It is nothing major but maybe choose 1 and stick with it. 4. Choose a way to describe the heart speed bps, hbps or anything else but a little the same as point 3. Choose 1 and stick with it. Also the first level of it is 10x not 1x if he goes from 1 bps normally and then he use it goes to 10 bps, which is alot, so maybe think about if you want it to be like a superpower later in the story, otherwise I would put 10 bps as the max level for the skill now.
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The novel starts of slow but picks up the pace ,one of the things i didn't like in this novel of the character of the mc ,the mc is too paranoid and wants respect even when he had not shown half his capability, sometimes he lets someone live even after seeing one of his best technique and uses enemies tools without knowing consequences .
a really great novel and perfect mc cold and ruthless doesn't have some dumb hero complex would even let millions die on his way to immorality.
It is a 2.5 star novel. The only things salvaging this novel is the frequency of updates, writing quality and how bad competition is .i have read till chapter 150ish but the story appears to be a wish fulfilment where MC gets everything on a silver spoon.He has mentality of some emo edgy teenager instead of some old man who has seen through thick and thin who knows how to put on a fake mask. An MC which thinks it is cool to be arrogant and rude . The only thing which keeps hus alive is plot Armour His whole personality is 2d cardboard and same can be said for pretty much everyone else. Only that book / pendant has some slight personality to it.TLDR: You will find the story to be 2 dimensional ( 1 to be exact but it is bearable as a quick stop gap to keep you going till you find something good.
After finishing the first volume I’ve decided to post my review. The biggest issue is that the author really needs an editor to do a quick once over, there are misused words everywhere, second is that the setting becomes very boring after a while, the trope of everyone backstabbing everyone else is rampant to the point of ridiculousness, the MC use of technological knowledge is good however. The story has promise and if you like a ruthless heartless monster of an MC you might enjoy this book! 3.4/5 total
I've been reading this novel now for almost 1.2 yrs and just have to say one thing about it, i got the same goosebumps reading this from the first day till now. highly recommended
hello wahi I just realised that chapters are getting short and shorter after 500chaps
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This novel presents a very poor use of the English language, and the power levels and different rankings are ten times worse. However, the novel stands out with a unique and exceptional protagonist. He is incredibly intelligent and lacks empathy for others as long as it benefits him. He will go beyond all limits to obtain what he desires, showing no concern for others and sacrificing millions of lives as if they mean nothing. His journey towards immortality seems to be solitary, without even friends or someone he can trust, even a little. Despite these negative aspects, the novel is remarkably wonderful and enjoyable to read, and I highly recommend it to experience a truly unique story.
I don’t really have much to say about it. One of the best novels I’ve read in a while. The protagonist is absolutely amazing. No romance as well which is great.
The story is not repeative. it's very interesting book. I really love the world building. the mc is also great. one thing which I like most about this novel is its concept. it's similar to REVERED INSANITY and GREED : ALL FOR WHAT? .it really kept me entertained. thanks I hope you can increase the release pace.
I really like the start of the story but as this goes on it kind of feels like repeating that complete change at the start of Epic Plains after that story goes smoother, with better, and better grammar and we also do not know much about past of our mc but as the story is progressing he is gaining more and more of his memories which I like more about this story
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been reading this masterpiece for almost an year now.... really enjoying it but MR AUTHOR only updates a single ch its annoying..
In conclusion, this novel would do wonders if it had a beta reader and a qualified editor. The protagonist's personality is horrible, not because he is a villain, but because it is so poorly written and planned that it simply makes him awful. There are many VERY visible plot holes in this story that the author ignores. The characters don't feel realistic and the Mc says so much unnecessary or cringe-inducing dialogue that I just want to kick him. (rewritten review)
I would only say about this story that if you like a shrewd and astute Mc you would love it... I appreciate suggestions and honest reviews, so please go all out with both... Lastly, if you find any spelling mistakes or grammar errors please point them out! #Wahi {: