Haruno with System

LV 5

SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

It's an alright read, just largely stats spams and difficult / important subjects are solved in very tiny chapters. I've read all that was postedat the moment and after chapter 10 the stats spams do seem less overpowering. That said its had to get immersed in the story due to how short, impersonal and stats heavy it is. When reading it, it's reminiscent of someone giving you the rundown of an entire arc in a single albeit larger paragraph. Likewise the actions of the mc are typical of female reincarnates. Just less detailed. I mean the uchiha massacre arc which she involved herself with was coverd within 500-700 words start to finish... Its like this throughout the story. She makes the usual connections, is loved by everyone, etc etc. Its fine if you just wanna read a quick summary a bare outline of a concept along with the stats she supposedly gained through whatever means but its not for you if like me, if you're looking for an actual emotionally engaging story, a new concept or a new perspective..

LV 4

Dia_BTS

I like this fic a lot . please update soon !!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

LV 14

James_Roberson

really good only thing is it reads alot like a history book or diary but that aside its a great fanfic with good logic and realistic solutions well as realistic as naruto is at least

LV 14

ranaltor

overall I'm giving this 5 stars for right now other than the really short chapters everything is good grammar is good the thoughts of via MC are great the world development is fast-paced but it doesn't distract from the store and it doesn't seem to rush if you know what I mean

LV 4

Cardude_4

The story has a somewhat decent premise, but still lacks in some sapects. All in all it's a good try. Personally however I couldn't enjoy it as much since I am really picky when it comes to minor lore errors and I think my taste is different from the author's. I do however find it nice to see that Hiruzen isn't evil even if he is really incompetent to not know the treatment of Naruto who is being watched by Anbu who report to the Hokage 24/7. Well as stated above, I can't stand these minor errors and thus the mediocre ranking. Maybe it gets better later though, I wouldn't know since I dropped halfway so take that into account as well and don't soly decide not to read thanks to my biased opinion

LV 1

DaoistTwPNf9

Amigo a fanfic em si e boa porem generica outras coisas sao furos no roteiro como por exemplo o itachi for seduzido por ela sendo que ele tinha uma namorada nao faz sentido outro e os professores do time 7