DanMachi: in Freya Familia with Bleach System

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magnet_release

Hey, author here. I just wanted to say that you guys can share what canon characters should MC recruit into Freya Familia or adopt as younger sisters (*cough* Airmid *cough*) under this review.

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Cameron_Henderson_0639

the author wanted a realistic story compared to other danmachi stories that were happier settings but he went to far with Alfia (a 7 year old girl) I mean how is he supposed to make the trauma of not only having your blood drained out and having to watch bigger and older men drink that blood in ecstasy but have another one lick your face end eat your eye out of its socket all while naked and tied up heal not only heal but fight.

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Y0G_S0TH0TH

only 1 chapter but it was hella amazing. your choice of Freya family got me hooked. there aren't any noticeable grammar mistakes. I just hope you don't drop this. got great hope on this one👍

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The_Zeta

Finally there's Alfia and Meteria in this story Hope you continue this novel please. I Bean searching for story' about Alfia and Meteria, I just respect For Alfia for her The sacrifice Sudah kangen kamu alfia Tolong penulis lanjutkan novel ini jangan berhenti.

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Wynwalker_Mcstubby

Really good so far hopefully you continue the story not many fics with freya as the main familia ——————————————————————————————————————————

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batman3251

Good fanfic Totally new from other danmachi fanfics.................................................................................[img=recommend]

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Demonis

yes mee tooo , joining freya family instead of hephaetus and hestia got mee hooked ...i hope u dont drop this..have my best wishes [img=recommend]

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OkayRose

Very good read :), Don't rush, do not time-skip yet, focus on the main character's growth, show us his training or exploring the world of Danmachi, I want to see your vision of the world you imagine it to be seeing as you are a good writer

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ArdaPendragon

Very well, I hope you will continue-Very well, I hope you will continue-Very well, I hope you will continue-Very well, I hope you will continue-Very well, I hope you will continue-Very well, I hope you will continue-Very well, I hope you will continue-Very well, I hope you will continue-Very well, I hope you will continue-Very well, I hope you will continue-Very well, I hope you will continue-Very well, I hope you will continue-Very well, I hope you will continue-Very well, I hope you will continue-Very well, I hope you will continue-Very well, I hope you will continue-Very well, I hope you will continue-Very well, I hope you will continue-Very well, I hope you will continue-Very well, I hope you will continue

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Dethpool_Mlg

I would like to inquire wether this will be a single pairing or a harem and if so how many would be in said harem so that I may know what kind of story I should expect?

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Potato20567

Oh dude, i though that i finally found a FF of Freya x MC …………… …………… …………… …………… …………… …………… …………… …………… …………… …………… …………… …………… …………… …………… …………… …………… …………… ……………

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DaoistjcJwtW

Sigue así la historia es muy buena ojala que el protagonista pueda conseguir una cura para las dos chicas ya que con eso puede curarla de todas formas sería posible

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Giis

nice to read! great start and character development. especially liked Freya's alternate reveal. 👍👍🏻👍👍🏻👍👍🏻👍👍🏻👍👍🏻👍👍🏻👍👍🏻

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Armando_Ortiz_9281

your doing good from my perspective personally I like the more darker aspects including the kidnapping not because of what happened in the scene but because every other fan fiction is all cupcakes and rainbows

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JIektor

Good story!!!................................................. Good story!!!...................................................... Good story!!!.......................................................... Good story!!!.............................................................. Good story!!!..................................................................

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Diky_Maulana

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ReMormius

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Rafael_Suassuna

I wanted more chapters, I love danmachi fanfic

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Daoist11jupT

Never done before idea or at least I’ve never seen, hyped for timeskip and good writing. Need I say more? (Also the first person I’ve made a review about after 500+ hours I reading)

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Virdan_snek

Not sure what I should write but it’s a good story so far isn’t bad and the story isn’t that slow or fast. I like the choice of Familia and the grammar isn’t bad.