I started writing a year ago, albeit rarely, and all of the stories I made are unfinished. Well, I mostly write poems so there's that. Anyways, nice to have you here!
2022-06-27 Joined Philippines
Maybe change, "in the morning when dawn had just appeared," into the exact time of dawn like six o'clock I guess.
In the morning when dawn had just appeared, the raindrops and gusts of wind continued to howl, and a young man jumped out of bed when he heard the loud sound of the alarm on the table, then he stepped into the bathroom to wash his face and prepare all the things needed.
Fantasy 路 Umam_Young
Very nice depictions of the scenes!
ch 0 1 Prologue
Fantasy 路 Masaiya_Ako
I took heed of your advice and updated chapter 1. Thank you!
ch 0 2 A Surprise
Fantasy 路 The_WindChaser
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Here, you don't need to add, "I thought". This is first POV, right?
No... I'm not doing this. Fucking Tate. I thought as a scowl runs across my face.
Fantasy 路 K_Elizabeth
May I know how or why the POV's aren't clear? Didn't it have an indicator? Nevertheless, thank you for the review!
The Wizard of The Seas
Fantasy 路 The_WindChaser