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LittleMonkey

Cant say much about where the story is going right now, because we are barely 10 chapters in, however: the writing quality is well above average than most fictions here on this site. Tired of novels with 5 Star ratings, reading a few chapters and getting annoyed about badly written system slaves, lazy and stupid MCs, weird young master and chinese novel vibes, authors without any respect or knowledge of the original story or any writing ability? None of these red flags up to this point. Well done, so far.

LV 13

PaQ24k_

I like the premise read have to chapter 13 amazing so far fully recommend this to anyone who likes jiraiya because his son will be like a jiraiya who was never a pervert good luck

LV 4

yUa

Interesting premise, never knew you would shift from Pokémon fics to a Naruto fanfic 👀 [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]

LV 11

Akahime

good, very very good keep up the great work, author-san!

LV 1

Ariaan

Let me write my review so far. °It's honestly good, and good in any means meant that it isn't like any other cliche fanfics or Chinese novels I've been reading that bore the heck outta me. It is good in the story itself, Kajirama's a brilliant child that was explained by the author(too many times I suppose) how and why he got the knowledge he had in him, slow pace, and AS IT SHOULD BE, it isn't cliche like power up dozens of times after ten push ups or such and etc. the progress is understandable and author made a few things very original. also, it is a plus now that I noticed it is the same author that made the pokemon one. So far loving the fanfic. [Why kill the mother tho?]