The Endless Run

hello author. I love reading books and as I found this book interesting for my kids I added it to library. I am looking for something more from you. my good wishes and expectations are with you. I have gone through the other reviews from other readers. they have complained some issues occuring in your book. yes, it's bit difficult to read your story cuz your text is mixed with the dialogues. after that I read the latest chapter. I found that you are improving yourself 😁 keep it up 🙂 thank you ❤️

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Sweet_Vanilla553

Hello hello, Author... I have already finished first 3 chapters. When I was reading I felt like that was parallel with out life. When I saw that morning waking up scene, I almost chocked because that was just too similat whaty sister does every morning.🤣 But I felt some errors with paragraphs. They were not seperated in the right place. I once saw, that paragraph was seperated in middle of a word. Hope you will pay more attention to it. Other than that the story is freaking funny and cool. I love it. Rooting for the author to keep going and update more. No rushing. You can take time and upload more since this fellow is waiting for another update.❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

lol. the girls are just like my best friends 🤣. I came to know that it's relatable to our lives. 😂 you must read it. btw I'm on chapter 4 now. I don't like cats but, I found it funny to see a girl having ' cat feverr' 😅

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Natay93

I liked how the story began. It has a real life aspect to it with wanting to win the fiesta and the behavioral traits of the girls. The character depiction was spot on. Overall good book.

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Vanila_Michelle

Wow, this is a nice story. An unique story, different theme, also different taste. The 4 girls, i like them. Keep writing, Author. I am waiting for the next chapter [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Ninestar619_5803

To be honest, this book is quite interesting and detailed about everything. Small narrating first and then the story runs fast. It's plot is good and easy to understand. Just a lot of long passage if shorten will be more interesting. But the plot is exciting. Want to know how far will they run and what lies in the end cause everything has an end. Good work.

this is such a funny adventure. best book for kindling 😅

nice 🙂 keep writing my student. one day you will be awarded by success 😃

best of luck. you need some improvement but overall the background, character, theme, and idea is good. good sense of dialogues are used. [img=recommend]

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diddingsdddd

Work on the basics. Dialogue, paragraph structure etc...Then worry about the story. You need to go back to chapter one and refine it, and use it as a template to learn, rewrite and restructure over and over again until you understand. it's the best advice I can give you.

excellent work, idea, thoughts. keep going like this i want more like this. as you said, my wish is that you write a motivational story for those who left hope from their life. those kinda books that reveals ways to be happy and have a peaceful life. really, your story gives me vibes of reality. its true that what you read with interest, you enter in it. you picked my choice. thank you. if you are seeing this, please accept my wish and fulfil my dreams.

the story theme is well and good. i liked the characters, they are relatable to me lol. I'm waiting for the twist to happen. can we have some more interesting stories?