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Due to my current physical and mental condition, I cannot continue to write. I apologize to those who have followed this novel.
I hope to come back again in the future because this is my passion.
Bye.
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Write a reviewWhat to say ahmm... It's my first time to give a review, I couln't help myself as the story managed to keep me entertained. Just in the first chap there's one example like why did the girl say sorry to him? The narrator knows how to describe, not just simply telling it. Good job! :)
I welcome you, potential readers. I won't waste your time. I just want to say this story is good. Hope you like it. So that I'm motivated to keep writing it.
I feel Gaasuja's main strength is characterization and it shows here. This is perhaps the most mainstream work of Gaasuja, but still has great potential. As long as he continues to maintain the quality of his chapters.
In my opinion, the author is too focused on the feelings of the characters, so there are some parts that are not conveyed properly. An example is the world building. However, maybe Gaasuja really likes to write in that style and this is just my opinion. But, the plot is quite interesting.
After reading a few of the chapters I can tell that the book is really good, it's entertaining and the writing quality is good along with the progression of the story, I like the overall idea though the author needs to work a bit more on the flow, it could be better. Other than that, a really nice read, keep up the good work.
What I miss about Gaasuja is his pretty wild idea of making books. However, this time the book is a bit generic. No problem, it's just a matter of my taste. The first page already made me curious, but the flow is a bit all over the place. Sometimes fast, sometimes slow. For the characters, this is probably one of the strong points of this story, although there are some that I feel are a bit forced. But, keep the good work.
I love the story synopsis and progression. The general concept is also nice. I highly recommend this novel. Keep up the good work author 👍 I hope to see more chapter uploads 😊
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For me, at least at this point, Hvisland still the best novel Gaasuja ever created. In term of story and character progression. But reading this (seven chapters so far), I think this novel might be as good as the previous one. or so i hope. Looking forward to read more chapters!