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I really love the story so far, I would live to see if the Author picks up the story and finish this great FF. Just a little suggestion Author: If you see you can't continue with the story why don't you look up for a team that can continue to update the story for you, that way you can focus on your IRL troubles for the time being.
when the synopsis is just the author telling you it was a story made out of boredom you should probably skip. unfortunately i gave it a shot and regretted it the first chapter. the wishes make no sense for the HP verse, and then there's the wish for dimension jumping. its not only poorly written but clichƩ and boring.
Tried to read it but couldn't past chapter 3, it's just plain cringe and idiocy.
it is a wonderful read. i was hooked completely, its just so bad that author stopped writting it. even so thanks for your great work
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one of the best HP fanfiction [ŠøŠ·Š¾Š±ŃŠ°Š¶ŠµŠ½ŠøŠµ=ŃŠµŠŗŠ¾Š¼ŠµŠ½Š“Š¾Š²Š°ŃŃ][ŠøŠ·Š¾Š±ŃŠ°Š¶ŠµŠ½ŠøŠµ = Š¾Š±Š½Š¾Š²Š»ŠµŠ½ŠøŠµ][ŠøŠ·Š¾Š±ŃŠ°Š¶ŠµŠ½ŠøŠµ=ŃŠµŠŗŠ¾Š¼ŠµŠ½Š“Š¾Š²Š°ŃŃ][ŠøŠ·Š¾Š±ŃŠ°Š¶ŠµŠ½ŠøŠµ = Š¾Š±Š½Š¾Š²Š»ŠµŠ½ŠøŠµ][ŠøŠ·Š¾Š±ŃŠ°Š¶ŠµŠ½ŠøŠµ=ŃŠµŠŗŠ¾Š¼ŠµŠ½Š“Š¾Š²Š°ŃŃ][ŠøŠ·Š¾Š±ŃŠ°Š¶ŠµŠ½ŠøŠµ = Š¾Š±Š½Š¾Š²Š»ŠµŠ½ŠøŠµ]
Fantastic story so far i love reading different concepts on how the harry potter series is made. I had great updates stability but has suddenly stopped i just hope that another favorite harry potter story doesn't drop off like the rest. More updates please
very good highly recommended............................... ........ ... ...................................................................
I read it in a day amazing story, good development, good use of abilities, ect. Now it needs a little work on the grammar, but that is something you can do later.
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Easily one of the best hp crossover fanfics that Iāve read this year. Hereās hoping you do decide to continue it.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
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it is absolutely good šš ,do keep updating ššššššššššššššššššššššššššššššššš
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I love it I hope you will continue the book I enjoy it very much so I like a little romance but the storyline are very good anyway thanks for the amazing fanfiction
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great bookšš .............................................................................................................................
You say this was your draft, but what I see is excellent fanfiction that is better than 99% harry potter fanfiction on this site. Anyway, I hope you won't leave this just as a draft and continue writing this even if you release chapters only occasionally I'm sure a lot of people will appreciate a great story like this one.
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Great hp fanfic I like what mc doing also love the op mc if you can do other people Pov it will be fantastic so keep up šššššššššššššš
Definitely a very good book except for some very few grammar mistakes the whole story till now has been a absolute blast and for the people who don't like overpowered Mc then I kindly suggest you go away instead of leaving a bad review ...just go away anyway good luck author-san and don't forget to rest well and take care of your health
Actually interested on where this goes. Too bad it was dropped. Though the mc does a few things i might not necessarily agree with. But my main complaint was hermiones personality. The change felt like a different character altogether
I really love the story so far, I would live to see if the Author picks up the story and finish this great FF. Just a little suggestion Author: If you see you can't continue with the story why don't you look up for a team that can continue to update the story for you, that way you can focus on your IRL troubles for the time being.
when the synopsis is just the author telling you it was a story made out of boredom you should probably skip. unfortunately i gave it a shot and regretted it the first chapter. the wishes make no sense for the HP verse, and then there's the wish for dimension jumping. its not only poorly written but clichƩ and boring.
Tried to read it but couldn't past chapter 3, it's just plain cringe and idiocy.
it is a wonderful read. i was hooked completely, its just so bad that author stopped writting it. even so thanks for your great work
Lo Ćŗnico que no me gusta de tu novela es que te que darte en una buena parte ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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one of the best HP fanfiction [ŠøŠ·Š¾Š±ŃŠ°Š¶ŠµŠ½ŠøŠµ=ŃŠµŠŗŠ¾Š¼ŠµŠ½Š“Š¾Š²Š°ŃŃ][ŠøŠ·Š¾Š±ŃŠ°Š¶ŠµŠ½ŠøŠµ = Š¾Š±Š½Š¾Š²Š»ŠµŠ½ŠøŠµ][ŠøŠ·Š¾Š±ŃŠ°Š¶ŠµŠ½ŠøŠµ=ŃŠµŠŗŠ¾Š¼ŠµŠ½Š“Š¾Š²Š°ŃŃ][ŠøŠ·Š¾Š±ŃŠ°Š¶ŠµŠ½ŠøŠµ = Š¾Š±Š½Š¾Š²Š»ŠµŠ½ŠøŠµ][ŠøŠ·Š¾Š±ŃŠ°Š¶ŠµŠ½ŠøŠµ=ŃŠµŠŗŠ¾Š¼ŠµŠ½Š“Š¾Š²Š°ŃŃ][ŠøŠ·Š¾Š±ŃŠ°Š¶ŠµŠ½ŠøŠµ = Š¾Š±Š½Š¾Š²Š»ŠµŠ½ŠøŠµ]
Fantastic story so far i love reading different concepts on how the harry potter series is made. I had great updates stability but has suddenly stopped i just hope that another favorite harry potter story doesn't drop off like the rest. More updates please
very good highly recommended............................... ........ ... ...................................................................
I read it in a day amazing story, good development, good use of abilities, ect. Now it needs a little work on the grammar, but that is something you can do later.
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Easily one of the best hp crossover fanfics that Iāve read this year. Hereās hoping you do decide to continue it.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
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it is absolutely good šš ,do keep updating ššššššššššššššššššššššššššššššššš
šI wish all the other storys whould publish chapters so fast _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I love it I hope you will continue the book I enjoy it very much so I like a little romance but the storyline are very good anyway thanks for the amazing fanfiction
Reveal Spoiler great bookšš .............................................................................................................................
You say this was your draft, but what I see is excellent fanfiction that is better than 99% harry potter fanfiction on this site. Anyway, I hope you won't leave this just as a draft and continue writing this even if you release chapters only occasionally I'm sure a lot of people will appreciate a great story like this one.
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Great hp fanfic I like what mc doing also love the op mc if you can do other people Pov it will be fantastic so keep up šššššššššššššš
Definitely a very good book except for some very few grammar mistakes the whole story till now has been a absolute blast and for the people who don't like overpowered Mc then I kindly suggest you go away instead of leaving a bad review ...just go away anyway good luck author-san and don't forget to rest well and take care of your health
Actually interested on where this goes. Too bad it was dropped. Though the mc does a few things i might not necessarily agree with. But my main complaint was hermiones personality. The change felt like a different character altogether