/ Fantasy / Fight like a king
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Baruld Sunrise, the son of a small tribe chief, was caught and sold as a slave. Luckily, he could get away after the place he was at was attacked by monsters. Venturing into the unknown, he found a magic crystal that gives talents to people. After getting all the possible talents, he fled after being found in that cave. Saving the life of a girl will grant him the territory he desires. But not anybody can become a king. You will need power, knowledge, and...luck!
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This is a very promising start (ending) to your story! I really enjoyed learning about the small kingdom and the people in it, from John scolding his people (but not with malice intended) to the man from the Browne family making shady deals, and I loved the mention of a young teen with his head held high as he hoped to tell his own great story! You've set up an interesting mystery behind who the youth with the wooden wolf head symbol, what his relation to the dying king may have been, just how that king came to be in such a state, and if this is the ending they've reached in their own respective journies - one reaching the end of his life and another carrying on to the next story he may one day tell - I can't wait to see what their beginnings are!
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I really like the narrative technique of the book, it really amazing and Honestly the book is really worth reading ☺️☺️... Please keep it up author 😘😘
A really interesting fantasy setting. The story is still in an early state, but I liked the narration and the descriptions so far. Keep it up, author! I recommend this novel!
TLDR: Solid foundation, but hasn't yet made the most of it. Holy expo-dump. It's competently done, but still in the style of most web-novels - a step-by-step guide to the author's created world. It's overbearing, but, again, not unlike most web-novels. Some writing errors, particularly tenses, cause misinterpretations of the writing to occur. I like the cheeky tone of the narrator. It is uniquely done, and the tone itself isn't overbearing, even if the exposition is. But after the first chapter, the narrator changes, and the tone is no longer present. Some word-choices are odd, and feel out of place. Very solid descriptions, really paints the picture for readers. Honestly, I liked the first chapter better than the 6 that followed, but I think the author has great potential to grow. So, I've used my daily power on them.
very well written,the usage of words is very eye captivating and last but not least your book cover is amazing it gives your book name more support.
This novel is off to a great start. Though I suggest using a different book cover and maybe a longer synopsis. The chapters seems to be a little short but I reallt enjoyed reading this.
An amazing start for the novel. I though the the author would continue like that, but oh, well. Although, the chapters seem a bit short. I hope that the future ones would be longer.