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Vial Secrets

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Author: slowestcook

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“Secrets are power, and mine is worth more than a little trouble to maintain…”

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It took a long time for me to truly understand what happened that day. That was the day that I began to learn how the world really worked. My father was right, the most important things couldn't be bought with money… things like innocence, friendship, security, justice... precious things that could be snatched away so easily. You couldn't buy them with money…

...but perhaps you could buy them with another currency. Perhaps you could buy them with power…

…and with secrets.

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A Mistborn story.

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slowestcook

Author here! 👀 Shameless review and also an opportunity to share some info. Just to set the expectation, this story will read like a prologue—it’s on the short side, but I really think what’s there is worthwhile. Revenge, underground, crime, adventure, action, magic… Strong emotions, but no specific romance, no harem. It’s a fanfic based on the world and magic system from the Mistborn series, but the characters and plot are original. You don’t need to be very familiar with the books to understand this story, most can be gleaned through context. (And if there are any questions, I’m pretty good about responding to comments.) Thanks to everyone for the support! (Today I broke in to the top 100 power stone ranking—whaaa?!) Fans have been unexpected—a unique group! 😂—but so very appreciated, especially as I’ve gone out on a limb and done something out of my comfort zone. Thank you! Happy reading! 🧡

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ritzypearl

The concept of the novel seems new yet refreshing. The flow of the story is great and makes you want to know what happens next perfect use of words and plenty of cliffhangers. For anyone into fantasy and magic, this story is a treat........ [img=recommend]

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ClaraJBong

I love it so far (chapter 10). FL is strong bc she observed, learned and put it all in practice. Not bc she just magically is. World settings are interesting and captivating. Well done!

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Fairyflash

Great start, thanks for all your hard work! I generally don't read fan fiction because authors assume you have seen or read what their work is based on but this feels more like world building than the vaguely described works that are so common.

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sects_sex

Chapters are kinda short and there's not much dialogue but I like the direction that it's going. I'm looking forward to seeing how she overcomes inheritance problems. Will there be romance, perhaps the King, Prince, or a skaa?

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