/ Fantasy / World Outlier
Synopsis
In a world ruled by tyrants, there are a brave few who directly oppose the system. They are called Outliers, but after centuries of battle the once mighty force who stood toe to toe with the tyrannical rulers of the world has been nearly wiped out.
A young boy named Masakado Mitsuhito aka Maska, is one of those few who have chosen to oppose the current world system.
Follow Maska along his journey. The boy who will become the man who changes the world!
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Write a reviewThe story is good and well-written. It took me a couple of minutes to adjust because of the writing style of the author, but it actually grow on me after some time. More chapters is what this book need.
A good direction for a novel, opposing the current system in place, brave and with a strong will. A novel for the ages and strongly recommended
This is really good, Masaka seems like an interesting character so I hope to hear more from him, though it could use an improvement in terms of grammar
The chemistry between Francis and Hatshu is the best. I want to know more about their eye fights. Different people with different personalities it's just interesting. I would recommend it to anyone who likes working as friends.
From the first two chapters I've read currently as of this review, this writing perspective kinda took me a bit to familiarise. I noticed some minor misspells that did stunned me for a bit and required some re-reads to understand them. This can be fixed with a little bit more time put on proofreading the work. Next, the dialogues are splendid as I could feel the tension in MC's voice however, I also noticed some lines that doesn't feel right in my mind. Maybe I'm just bad enough to read the dialogue but regardless. Story so far has been very interesting with the tragedy story involving MC. Character design are pretty good imo and as I said earlier, in two chapters, the world building could be a very interesting bit in the next chapters. I'm down to tune in for more, Author. You're reeled me in.
This novel is great. I love how it feels like I'm reading a manga or watching an anime. The scenes are dramatic and emotional in all the right ways and the world is interesting and well designed,
Author SamirVanterpool
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