I just want to create a world interesting enough to make your day better
2021-11-30 Joined United States
Are you asking if the main character will have a Harem?
The author did well at setting the scene and describing what goes on. I also like the relationship between Theaus and Shura. You did a good job of characterizing their bond. But there are improvements to be made in terms of dialogue exchanges.
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I like how you made use of sound effects it make m feel more Immersed in th action going on in the storye
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Against The Demon
Fantasy · ShiroHayasaka
Thanks I’ve been putting a lot of work into it.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Prologue
Fantasy · SamirVanterpool
Yeah we gotta get in a call one day.
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Yo Ekiram, did you make this new cover art yourself?
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I can honestly say i enjoyed this novel. I've read 30 chapter and everyone was well worth it. The characters are well written and the stories premise is exciting and I cant wait to read more
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It's not letting me leave a review for some reason
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Yeah there is no romance and it’s male lead
World Outlier
Fantasy · SamirVanterpool