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SamirVanterpool

SamirVanterpool

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I just want to create a world interesting enough to make your day better

2021-11-30 Joined United States

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The author did well at setting the scene and describing what goes on. I also like the relationship between Theaus and Shura. You did a good job of characterizing their bond. But there are improvements to be made in terms of dialogue exchanges.

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Replied to Sleeping_Scholar

Yeah we gotta get in a call one day.

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Replied to Sleeping_Scholar

Yo Ekiram, did you make this new cover art yourself?

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I can honestly say i enjoyed this novel. I've read 30 chapter and everyone was well worth it. The characters are well written and the stories premise is exciting and I cant wait to read more

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Replied to Sleeping_Scholar

Okay got it.

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It's not letting me leave a review for some reason

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