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Harry Potter: The Beast Whisperer
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Note: The world is not exactly the HP world. You will find multiple differences for example some dragons in the story are actually intelligent and comparable to gods.
The story follows a child who was abandoned on a magical island as a baby and has the power to communicate with and understand the island's magical creatures. He is isolated from the outside world due to the fear and prejudice against magical creatures, and his only friends are a lethifold he wears as a protective cloak, a Nundu who raised him as her own, and an adopted dragon named Blaze.
One day, the child discovers a secret that threatens to expose him and his friends to the world. With danger looming on the horizon, the child must embark on a journey to discover the truth about his past and his connection to the magical world. Along the way, he will encounter new friends and foes, face challenges and obstacles, and ultimately uncover a plot that could change the fate of the wizarding world forever.
As the child and his friends navigate the dangers and mysteries of the magical world, they will learn the true meaning of friendship, courage, and sacrifice. Will they be able to overcome the odds and save the ones they love, or will they fall victim to the forces that seek to destroy them?
The story used narration at the start but will have chapter where POV is used.
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Honestly came upon this story by chance but seems like a story with great potential. The writing and grammar are a 5/5, the overall character development and background seems to be at a good pace (hoping that more will be explained on how tf the mc ended up on the island in more detail), and there is not anything negative I can really say about the story this early on (currently only 4 chapters). I hope that the author will continue with a decent upload schedule!
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It’ has potential but it doesn’t read like a story more like and overview of what could’ve been a good story there are no firsthand interactions I.e. you say he picked up a dragon egg but never describe it it’s more like continual background information rather than a story and the story develops too fast and all relationships are just glossed over this is a good story idea but the execution leaves a lot to be desired
The premise and potential is good, and the writing quality in terms of grammar and spelling is good. But as others have stated there's a lot of telling instead of showing. Other than that, I think the MC's backstory and/or development needs some work. The MC is introduced, but other than the fact that he has some form of Allspeak ability we don't really know much about his personality. Additionally, he makes a lot of minor decisions for indecipherable reasons. In the end I'm not sure if it's just the author trying to move along the plot, or if there's some other reason that'll become apparent later. But atm there's no stated rhyme or reason for the MC's feelings/actions, so it just comes off as random developments. The only other thing that stands out about this is it seems to be a minor AU. Not sure why, bc so far the AU aspects don't seem to really add anything to the story and only serve to inject a feeling of unfamiliarity (or at least that's how I feel while reading it). Anyways, lot's of potential, but so far it seems rather wasted..
Alot of event explaining and not enough story telling early chaps but not a good start. I fear it will be just another fanfic that ruins its potential which it has in spades. Please dont just tell show instead dialougue, inner mc thoughts, etc. This happened that happened doth not make an enjoyable read. Writings hard all respect love idea of this