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Shinobi of The Rinnegan of The Hidden Leaf
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This is about some people to be reincarneted in the world of Naruto. All of them dont know much about the series but one of them does. well this one person his name is Zienort Zeldian. He has black hair and is the only one to get to make 3 wishes the rest only but 1 or 2.
Everyone thinks this will be fun thinks that this will be fun and games. But Zienort does not think this way he know's there going to be a lot of deaths. So what will he wish for and what will he plan for and will he do before reincarnation. Stay here and find out! (I do not own Naruto this just a fanfic. Credits belong to Masashi Kishimoto.)
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Terrible grammar, just get an editor, even the for plot I'll have to say it's a zero, it all just seems forced
It’s gibberish, I don’t think I read one proper statement. It would be good if you can proof read your story and edit
no negativity this has potential but grammar mate get quillbot to check your stuff or find an editor or something also your wrighting is muddled honestly even a 2 star is too good for this book everything nneds to improve and also make him be able to switch the rinnegan on and off like madara since its his rinnegan also let him grow to 9 tails reserves by the time the war comes and dont give it to him instantly since thats boring also make it so he can also use susanoo but only when the war is a bout to start also his 2 mangekyo abilities if i am being honest i would have asked for a rinnegan that went through ascension since i get to keep my sharingan abilities and i dont end up like pain who cant use madaras sharingan abilities
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