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MC transmigrate in the world of one piece with system. He has OP gamer system which he use to become strong. MC is stupid at first but like to get stronger and then fight so not a lot of drama.
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if creator want massage me i will remove it.
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the 15 chapters = 2 chapters of a normal fanfic (- 3 stars) an imbecial system (-1 star) I feel like I could explain more, but I'll follow the author's example and just put that number of words
I mean the synopsis says everything and if I would have red it beforehand...... sigh I would have never started it. After just two paragraphs I have to say, that the grammar here is really bad and it is really disturbing.
😂😂😂 Well I find it funny since the chapters are so short that, it felt like author is using one chapter to write one dialogue. 15 chapter = 15 dialogue Well, it's your first time.So, try better next time or try to improve in the later chapters of this novel.😇😇😇
les 15 chapitres = 2 chapitres d'une fanfic normale (- 3 étoiles) un système imbécile (-1 étoile) J'ai l'impression que je pourrais expliquer plus, mais je vais suivre l'exemple de l'auteur et mettre juste ce nombre de mots................................................................................................................................................
just five stars because i felt like it ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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What is the need for impol down floor information? Etc... Book good but There is Not enough chapter, Book good but There is Not enough chapter
mc is a complete idiot, system gives unhelpful choices from the start, author won't shut up every dialog he has to comment after. just bad, really bad
So so, that explains a little more the combats with strategic movements. The monologue is good but repeating it a lot is dizzy, at times it's fine. (it would be great to continue as a rewards house only my selfishness to ignore) There is a future, keep going. thank you 😸
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The idea is good but the writing style is so childish, and it feels like the writer is writing dialogue and thoughts for the first time. Would not recomend. Tip to the author: there is nothing wrong with having a stupid MC but you have to make him interesting and likable or else your story will be boring.