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In the Harry Potter world with a system
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This a story I'm trying to make after reading way too much harry potter fanfic... A story of the life of a sad boy beginning his life in the harry potter world with a system and knowledge of the future. What will he do, what changes will he make, what side will he be on?
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I see all these 5 amd 4 stars and 100 people didnt read or fake because no way is that this high a rating. Mc is dumb af and treats new life like its fake or a game. He reveals isntantly to mcgonagall that he knows about hogwarts and magic and who she is. With no excuse or explanation and author doesnt even follow up on it. Goes to Diagon alley and he like outloud i always wanted to visit. Its stupid. Btw he a orphan in muggle world that has no connection to magic so no excuse how he know. Its poorly pit together sadly plus a system. If here for a decent ff then leave because this aint it. Sorry author but its true.
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Awesome Harry Potter novel. I am excited to see his system and to see his relationship develop with the girls
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copy summary: Mc is dumb af and treats new life like its fake or a game. He reveals isntantly to mcgonagall that he knows about hogwarts and magic and who she is. With no excuse or explanation and author doesnt even follow up on it. Goes to Diagon alley and he like outloud i always wanted to visit. Its stupid. Btw he a orphan in muggle world that has no connection to magic so no excuse how he know. Its poorly pit together sadly plus a system. If here for a decent ff then leave because this aint it. Sorry author but its true.