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A young adult goes to sleep one day, he did not expect that the next time he opened his eyes he would do so as a baby, even less he expected it to be like the son of a female character from a series that he only saw in passing.
This is a translation of my fanfic in Spanish, it is not my first language, so I will appreciate the corrections.
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I don't know if it's just me, but I found it hard to follow. Too many crossovers and not clear with timeskips, I've been reading each chapter as a mini story arc with timeskips missing a chunk of interaction between characters. I do believe this fic has a good start, but wavers as more and more characters are introduced as each chapter passes. The main character for me is a bit much, I think he has too much going on as he changes rapidly, not sure if it reads better in Spanish. Wish you all the best with this story!