/ Fantasy / Rainbow in the Dark
Synopsis
Adonis Castellan lives in a post Apocalyptic world where most humans have retreated underground and select others are left to master unique weapons that will allow them to destroy the invaders known as viruses. Adonis however has a few complaints. The first, everyone insists on using his codename rather than his real one, the second no one wants to explain the origins of his existence, the third "why has he been given the most powerful weapon?"
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Write a reviewit's good! it got the ambient feeling and futuristic yet dark settings. It's a nice read, please support the author and leave like, collectionadn vote😁
Wow writing is amazing on this one, dialogue is amazing as well! the pacing is good so far and I like the setting of the story. We need more chapters for this one
We don’t know much so it’ difficult to rate this. But one thing I can say for sure. Good writing and I am hyped to see where this goes. We just got a little crumble of the cake let’s see.
Amazing! I like how the characters are described, especially how everyone appears seems to know something except for the main character. The setting is also quite nice, it has a slight sci-fi feel to it. Overall, despite there only being one chapter so far, it’s pretty good!
Novel has some good potential. I can see a couple errors in the writing, but nothing that a simple wave of proofreading wouldn't fix! Not much to go off of since it's only the first chapter, but definitely a novel with potential
This is only the first chapter, yet so much had been said in few words. We know th setting, a glimpse of the plot, a hint of the world building and most importantly we got quaintly acquainted with our main character and a quirk of his. Wonderful wording, great detail and smooth transition. This is no work of an amateur, but someone experienced with a knack for imagery and description
Author pyritenemo000
The book has an interesting premise with a refreshing lack of medieval isekai. Tho, there is still room for improvement with the character dialogue