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Just a random guy in the world of MHA with nanomachines
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Author fixed an issue with his chapters on the same day I spoke about it, see my other review to see it. If that don't deserve 5 stars, I don't know what does.
It has come to my attention that you guys didn't like the format in which I was writing. So I will be editing the chapters so that it's much more presentable. Thanks for all the advice people have been giving me. I will try to improve as I continue writing. Hope you have a good day.
There is a critical flaw in this fanfic: Paragraphs are so bulky and long that it feels like almost a punch in the face. Author, please, press [Enter] a couple more times. Also, be mindful that speeches and thoughts in the first person must be a paragraph on their own, instead of in the middle of a big one. Example: "Hey, how are you?" Said he as an arrow flew right at his side. 'How is he doing that?' Thought he as he dodged another attack. I really like this fanfic, it can be easily developed. But that paragraph is torture to read through. Edit more your chapters. Especially the first ones which are the worst and also the first thing the readers are gonna see. Not a good first impression. I only bothered pushing through because I'm a hardcore fan of Nano Machine manwha.
Hi there , Newbie Author here. This is the first time I have ever written something like a full blown story. All support u show me will motivate me to do better. Constructive criticism is appreciated. Have a nice day.
well I thought this would be interesting, but oh well first the author is already giving the mc way too many powers, yet he still says it's quality over quantity. like just nano and his inborn quirk(telekinesis) is more than enough to dominate mha. but author is giving him every physic power possible mind control, pyrokineses, telepathy and much more. also he's giving him multiple quirks, and the mc is also a cultivator. at this point he might as well be all for one. The grammar is somewhat ok, but the author does use words like "u" instead of "you". also mc has no personality at all, feels like a robot.
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So I think it's written pretty decently if the author's never written before. I have a few issues that others seem to share. I got to chapter 10 so there's not many but it definitely effected my overall score. -The nanosuit armor is just bad first off. Like it didn't do jack when he fought two thugs. Ribs broken and internal organs hurt. Seems to me like you just nerfed the armor. -Speaking of nerfs, he did a surgery to improve himself and the author forgot Nano could just.. do that itself without the help of the brainwashed doctors. -Brainwashing. Yeah so like everyone he interacts with besides his parents and classmates that he-apparently-needs something from, he just straight up brainwashes them. Which is just villainous behavior. -Villainous behavior. Yeah so why join UA when you're clearly set on manipulating the people around you? I suspect he'll just keep doing it later on and to more important characters. So I guess going to UA is just for him to be there for the main plot, I guess? -Personality. Frankly he's not all too interesting, if I'm being honest. He's not boring per se but there's nothing that stands out to me. He seems to respect hard work and does like Deku but where's that appreciation in "hard work" when you straight up brainwash people to get what you want? -Grammar. It's decent. There are some minor mistakes but it's excusable. Except when the author uses "u" instead of "you". Like jfc man.. It's not a text. This is a story. Anyway it's not bad, but not great. Kinda sits in the middle here. This is also not to discourage the author because this is a cool idea. I just think you can iron out these flaws and it'll be a lot better.
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Well this is the second time I try to read this fic, the first time I couldn't get past the mess you had with the endless paragraphs and I didn't get past chapter 2 This second time, although some chapters still need to be fixed, the first of these are readable and you caught me with them. I just finished reading the last chapter, which is currently 13. For now you are doing well with the story, as I already said, you caught me so that I would read it all the way through. keep up the good work looking forward to the next chapters <3 <3 <3
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Excellent Fanfic, I really liked the fact that the protagonist has such an appealing peculiarity, like telekinesis. I hope he shows his full potential in some other chapter.
barely even into cannon and all this seems like is another "MC gains a bunch of abilities and OP mc fic" its just boring. summarized this is just another basic wish fufillment nothing too special about it
I liked it, I hope that the fan fiction will not be abandoned and will finish it. (0010101010010101001010100101010100101010101010101010010101010101010101010101001010101)
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Regardless of how it is, I'm giving five stars because I wanted to read a story with that 'power'
if he doesn't speak "nanomachines son" at some point in the fic, I'll come back here and give a negative no matter if I liked the story or not. u-u
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