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In a world filled with uncaring Gods and oblivious mortals, Damon is on a quest for revenge. After his entire life was upended by a callous God, he has been searching for the power he needs to save his friends. Will his new godly powers be able to help him resist the tides of fate, or will he be swept away?
Thanks for taking the time to read the synopsis. I’m a new writer and so I’d like to hear any feedback from you guys. My upload schedule also might be spotty since I have exams and AP tests coming up but I will do my best to keep it to around one chapter a day. I hope you enjoy.
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Write a reviewSo far with it's only been 12 chapters but it looks promising, a few things to fix would be Damon's reaction in the first chapter, as it was too quick, some dialogue sounds unnatural, in chapter three, for reasons unspecified Damon knew things he shouldn't or atleast it wasn't mentioned why he did what he did, like how did he know that he could build a manor? and why do something as risky as pulling on his heart? These questions might have an answer that is mentioned later. The concept of the power itself is interesting and unique, the manor building, gathering faith to strengthen himself, the company, the world he is about to conquer, all those concepts are very promising. The writing is good, although a bit rushed in the earlier chapters, that could be easily fixed, the fights are very well done, and flow well, so yea all in all good novel, with a lot of promise that just needs a bit of editing.
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Very promising novel. So far, the quality is very good!!